Oh Life!
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Wonder!"Experiences of living
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Comment from Badger_29
Hi I didn't realize how long you've been here how long we've been friends you see I almost died four times now and you have become my mentor here because I almost lost my life for the fourth time God saved me. I have the feeling we're going to be great friends here because I can see in your riding a depth in a meaning and a purpose and you're undying ability to pay money to revive all this things I see nothing but
,"post revived, post revived, post revived, post revived,"and I know now that as a man of God
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Hi I didn't realize how long you've been here how long we've been friends you see I almost died four times now and you have become my mentor here because I almost lost my life for the fourth time God saved me. I have the feeling we're going to be great friends here because I can see in your riding a depth in a meaning and a purpose and you're undying ability to pay money to revive all this things I see nothing but
,"post revived, post revived, post revived, post revived,"and I know now that as a man of God
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and very well written true poem. You used very good descriptive and very true words. Very neat imagery to go with your work. Thank you for sharing with us. May God bless you! Teri
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This is a very interesting and very well written true poem. You used very good descriptive and very true words. Very neat imagery to go with your work. Thank you for sharing with us. May God bless you! Teri
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from Begin Again
Each of us draws our own conclusions about life, happenings, thoughts... our decisions may not match that of someone else. We can not expect everyone to be happy with the way we choose because God has given mankind the ability to choose, the ability to discover and find a different way. Smiles, CArol
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Each of us draws our own conclusions about life, happenings, thoughts... our decisions may not match that of someone else. We can not expect everyone to be happy with the way we choose because God has given mankind the ability to choose, the ability to discover and find a different way. Smiles, CArol
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The two opposing sides of life, those who forge ahead and those who proceed with caution, it is best to find a balance if we can, but I have always tended to jump in with both feet, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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The two opposing sides of life, those who forge ahead and those who proceed with caution, it is best to find a balance if we can, but I have always tended to jump in with both feet, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from elchupakabra
I think that sometimes we can feel like nothing we ever do is enough and this is definitely a great representation of that. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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I think that sometimes we can feel like nothing we ever do is enough and this is definitely a great representation of that. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Jaden M Butler
I love the visualization you provide with your wording. I also like the use of opposite wording per line. Overall this poem is straight to the point and provides a feeling of having an enemy trying to drag you down. It's relatable and an enjoyable read.
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I love the visualization you provide with your wording. I also like the use of opposite wording per line. Overall this poem is straight to the point and provides a feeling of having an enemy trying to drag you down. It's relatable and an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
Words of wisdom! You have delivered a nice message through a very few lines. No matter what we do, there is always someone unhappy. Thanks for the reminder.
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Words of wisdom! You have delivered a nice message through a very few lines. No matter what we do, there is always someone unhappy. Thanks for the reminder.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
This poem tends to show what we are capable of doing and how other people view it. There are consequences for doing a number of them. I think I understand this poem better than most.
Patty
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This poem tends to show what we are capable of doing and how other people view it. There are consequences for doing a number of them. I think I understand this poem better than most.
Patty
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
A great message here and you deliver it in only a few lines.
Thank you for author notes explaining your POV. Great imagery and visuals and I love the artwork chosen!
Thank you for sharing this.
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A great message here and you deliver it in only a few lines.
Thank you for author notes explaining your POV. Great imagery and visuals and I love the artwork chosen!
Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from palmart
Nice poem! It reflects our humanity in a simple manner... We usually have not a middle point, we play on the extremes... and react consequently... All the recognitions you have obtained come from both your wisdom and (at the same time) your sense of humour!
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Nice poem! It reflects our humanity in a simple manner... We usually have not a middle point, we play on the extremes... and react consequently... All the recognitions you have obtained come from both your wisdom and (at the same time) your sense of humour!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
