Fred and Thelma
You callin' me shabby?15 total reviews
Comment from Carl DeVere
A very good chuckle. I can hear that great ol' suthan twang. This reminds me of some radio shows of yesteryear in which two people of character have humorous dialogues. Well done. Sometimes I miss those simpler times.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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A very good chuckle. I can hear that great ol' suthan twang. This reminds me of some radio shows of yesteryear in which two people of character have humorous dialogues. Well done. Sometimes I miss those simpler times.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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You just gave me an idea. Maybe I'll start a Fred and Thelma Show.
Would you like to give me a subject you think would be funny that they can talk about. Each time, maybe I could ask for suggestions.
Katharine - pome lover
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What about their differing viewpoints on the town's scarlet woman--"that painted hussy?"
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good idea. will give it some thought.
thanks!
Katharine
Comment from padumachitta
Hello That was fun, and a good entry for the dialogue only contest. Please check the rules and the example, I think you might have to change a few things with set up. Good e
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Hello That was fun, and a good entry for the dialogue only contest. Please check the rules and the example, I think you might have to change a few things with set up. Good e
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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hmmm
will do
thanks
pome lover
Comment from robyn corum
Katharine,
I can hear this couple clearly. *smile* They sound like a few people I know. hahaha This is quite fun - with several puns that are remarkably clever. I enjoyed it a lot and wish you luck in the voting!
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Katharine,
I can hear this couple clearly. *smile* They sound like a few people I know. hahaha This is quite fun - with several puns that are remarkably clever. I enjoyed it a lot and wish you luck in the voting!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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thanks, Robyn! I appreciate your neat comments and good wishes.
Katharine - pl
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well done. I so enjoyed reading this conversation. A bit of wit here and there and fondness seeping through the sarcastic remarks. So real and viable. The picture adds to the genre.
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Well done. I so enjoyed reading this conversation. A bit of wit here and there and fondness seeping through the sarcastic remarks. So real and viable. The picture adds to the genre.
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you! You got exactly my intent.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from Mark Valentine
Love it. It reminds me of something humpwhistle would write. The playful argument contained in the dialogue is entertaining in itself, but it also speaks to a sweet relationship between Fred and Thelma (nicely chosen names, by the way - it gives a sense of their age. I don't think there's anyone under 50 with those names).
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Love it. It reminds me of something humpwhistle would write. The playful argument contained in the dialogue is entertaining in itself, but it also speaks to a sweet relationship between Fred and Thelma (nicely chosen names, by the way - it gives a sense of their age. I don't think there's anyone under 50 with those names).
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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thank you. Those names just made me smile and meant an easy-going couple, happy and comfortable with each other. I don't even know anybody under 50 anymore, but don't think Ian and Heather would've worked. :)
Many thanks for the 6 and for your comments.
Katharine - pome lover
