Wolf in the Fold
Monsters in disguise are everywhere..even in God's House6 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. Wow, I see why this is in the lead in the booth, it's a chilling story on the worst kind of monster. You did an outstanding job on this piece. Good luck! ~Kerry
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Hello there, my friend. Wow, I see why this is in the lead in the booth, it's a chilling story on the worst kind of monster. You did an outstanding job on this piece. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
Comment from pharp
You my friend have described the worst of the worst of monsters. You poem is exceptionally penned delivering a powerful message about a wolf in fold; perfect artwork as well. Thanks for sharing of the information in your author's note. The very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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You my friend have described the worst of the worst of monsters. You poem is exceptionally penned delivering a powerful message about a wolf in fold; perfect artwork as well. Thanks for sharing of the information in your author's note. The very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for the positive review and 6 stars...these sick people could have been stopped but the Vatican opted to turn an eye and in doing so many young boys and girls lives were destroyed..
The Vatican did a disservice to us and to God and now people have lost their faith.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Many people turn to the church not knowing there are sometimes monsters inside. The worst of the is pedophile priests. Snatching young souls who look to them for guidance.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Many people turn to the church not knowing there are sometimes monsters inside. The worst of the is pedophile priests. Snatching young souls who look to them for guidance.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
The worse crime and the Vatican instead of condemning these offenders,instead opted to close an eye and hide for decades their dirty little secret...
No wonder,today churches are empty... people have lost their faith.
Like the bible says :you reap what you sow.
Thank you for sharing your opinion
Comment from rhonnie69
CIAO POET: I just want you to know that I agree with you here. Also I would like to add to your truth. Our God advises us to: "Put on the whole armor of God, that we may be able to stand against the wiles of the devil. For we do not wrestle against flesh and blood...but against principalities, against powers, against the rulers of the darkness of this age, against spiritual hosts of wickedness in the heavenly places."
EPHESIANS chapter 6: and at verses 11&12. Thank you for sharing this important message, Poet. You are appreciated. God bless and keep you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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CIAO POET: I just want you to know that I agree with you here. Also I would like to add to your truth. Our God advises us to: "Put on the whole armor of God, that we may be able to stand against the wiles of the devil. For we do not wrestle against flesh and blood...but against principalities, against powers, against the rulers of the darkness of this age, against spiritual hosts of wickedness in the heavenly places."
EPHESIANS chapter 6: and at verses 11&12. Thank you for sharing this important message, Poet. You are appreciated. God bless and keep you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt, that is a monster if I never heard of one. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt, that is a monster if I never heard of one. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank so much for the kind review...these pedophile priests used their position and the trust church goers and children had in them, to feed their depravities.
It's time the Vatican cleaned up in their house...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a poignant write and we have had a bishop who had a history child abuse and was finally brought to justice, but it was too late for his victims, one of them committed suicide because he could not face the shame of what happened to him, this man ruined his life. Your words here are profound and also very sad that we give these kind of people power without knowing their true intentions, a fine poem about the real monsters in our society, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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This is such a poignant write and we have had a bishop who had a history child abuse and was finally brought to justice, but it was too late for his victims, one of them committed suicide because he could not face the shame of what happened to him, this man ruined his life. Your words here are profound and also very sad that we give these kind of people power without knowing their true intentions, a fine poem about the real monsters in our society, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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That is very sad ..The Vatican is to blame .. it could have avoided a lot of pain ..
...it should have stopped those pedophiles ...
..instead it chose to hide the truth for decades and in so doing destroyed so many children?s lives ..
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Ciao Dolly!
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I voted for you because this is such a poignant piece, good luck, love Dolly x
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Thank you for your vote ....
In all honesty ,I feel Thomas Bowling's entry "Making a Monster " is an excellent entry ..and best of the lot.. He got my vote.
Thank you for your support .. ( smile )
