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Rock n Roll Reminiscing

Do you remember us on warm Fall nights...?

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Comment from May 1
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Wow, that sure is an interesting choice for the topic, I love the reminiscing tone. Wonderfully said and very fun to read even for someone who doesn't have similar experiences.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, my lady! ;) Yvette


Comment from Sally Law
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Woo! Burning up the pages of FanStory, yet again. I live with my moonroof babe even still. I'd guess you'd say I'm living the dream. Superb and aptly illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good image and
presentation, Yvette.
-Love that song!
-The syllable count
and topic are good.
-Effective imagery and
alliteration, as well as
the song title in the conclusion!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Pam! ;) Yvette
reply by Pam (respa) on 29-Jan-2020
    You are very welcome, Yvette. I think they do just that. What a set of pipes, Steve Tyler had! He was great as a judge on Idol, too. Very talented.
Comment from Minglement
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Thanks for sharing this very touching entry in the three line poem contest. With so few syllables and words you took the reader back in time to an era of young love. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Consider the memories a free smile from me to you, my friend!! ;) Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and my crazy escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Mingle, and those lovely stars! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Memories of a song here Yvette and you brought the music to my ears here! A fine 3 line poem and I wish you luck with the contest, a magical write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    The memories are a free smile from me to you, Dolly!! ;) Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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We all treasure those high school memories, and here is one memory of a boyfriend that seems to be from the 1970s. There is some 'm' and 'd' alliteration throughout. Caught the end rhyme of 'dawn' and 'on.' Nice tie in to Aerosmith rock lyrics.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Crystie! ;) Yvette
reply by CrystieCookie999 on 29-Jan-2020
    Yep, yep. I guess I would feel the same way about the group A-ha.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written three-line poem remembering the rock and roll days and make outs on roof tops until dawn, a hope that your babe of the time will keep dreaming.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Thank you so very much, Sandra, for your wonderful support! ;) Enjoy the rest of the week! ;)
Comment from Joan E.
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I am glad your Rock and Roll reminiscing lead you to Aerosmith's song and you riffed about the memories and added alliteration to intensify the mood. Yes, dream on... Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    LOL! I see what you did there: 'riffed' the memories.... and oh, Aerosmith's Joe Perry could riff to get under your skin and make you feel it! Thanx for the review, Joan - dream on! ;) Yvette
reply by Joan E. on 29-Jan-2020
    Thanks for hearing my subtle humor. More smiles- Joan
Comment from Therese Caron
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A great memory for me! Aerosmith was a huge part of my growing up. Lately I find myself going on YouTube and finding songs I loved when I was a teenager and in college. I must be in a nostalgic phase. Great poem. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    You and me both - just consider these memories a free smile from me to you!! ;) Like with you, Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into my today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Terry! ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
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Yeah, your reminiscing brings back memories. Mine are there but in another language, Yvette. This is a very good entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest. Rock on Lady. :) :)

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Hey there, Jose!! So good to hear from you, sir -- missed seeing that moniker in the listing!! ;) And thanx for your awesome review on this one ... just been playing with a bit of nostalgia, I suppose: Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Jose, and take good care of you over there! ;) Yvette