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Rock n Roll Reminiscing

Do you remember us on warm Fall nights...?

40 total reviews 
Comment from Bicpen
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Classic ... what we all dream about it holds a perfect image and testifies to the reality of the hope within the dream ... It says a lot without holding refrain and asks the desire to loose the reigns and indulge. It tears the seam of realism and patches the jeans of mystic fantasy. I comes to the climax of a sharp wonder moment with perfect intuition and an astounding discovery of well being and total adjustment ... heres to it ... on the other hand some women over in the UK when they like to get rid of a man actually use the climax of your dream scenario to get rid of the men by using it in a sarcastic man ... DREAM ON ... how cruel !

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Wow - this one must have really touched a little something in you, my friend... and what a cool expression that it 'patches the ueans of mystic fantasy' -- that is AWESOME!! ;) :) Hopefully you have some happy memories from those time even though some women give the rest of us a bad name... :( ;( For me, Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and my escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, B-P, and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
reply by Bicpen on 31-Jan-2020
    Anytime ...
Comment from Ricky1024
Excellent
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"Rock and Roll Reminiscing'
Is a 3 Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Good luck with this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Thanx so much for dropping by on this one, Doc -- always good to hear from you over here! :) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Holy Rock n Roll Yvette!

Another terrific piece you composed. Thanks for the memories!

I was more a Motown fan, but Aerosmith had great songs too. Of course, there was a band from Liverpool that stormed our shores that was clearly the best in the 1960-70s era!

Enjoyed your alliterations in your middle line. Any make outs for me were not on moon roofs (-;

Mark


 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    The memories are a free smile from me to you!! ;) Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and my escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Mark! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your 5-7-7 certainly fulfills the prompt. It is well-written, exuberant, and descriptive in its addressing of Aerosmith, who has been around for a loooong time!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Shhhh...you're not supposed to say the 'looooong' word!! ;) Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and my escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Janice! ;) Yvette
reply by Janice Canerdy on 31-Jan-2020
    :-)
reply by Janice Canerdy on 31-Jan-2020
    :-)
Comment from Phoenix Rising
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Wow!
An Aerosmith fan, How cool.
Been a fan since "Toys in the Attic".
You are full of surprises. Always enjoy reading your poems.
Keep em coming :-)

Phoenix Rising

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and my escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Phoenix! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sugarray77
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Oh, I remember Aerosmith and the whole gang at the Pizza Hut after football games. Those bands are so entertained in my teen years. Thanks for bringing back sweet memories. Good write.. good luck, Yvette.

Melissa

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    The memories are a free smile from me to you!! ;) Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Melissa! ;) Yvette
Comment from Rikki66
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You are a child, my memories are of a 56 ford whos dome light was painted red. The Beatles and Bobbie Venton on the radio. Love Love me do and Blue velvet. Then Moon Corners in the Hotel Agbar with Sinatra and Strangers in the night.
Rikki

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Thank you, THANK YOU -- I shall tell myself that the next few times I look in the mirror and get discouraged - lol! ;) :) Believe it or not, Ol' Blue Eyes is my favorite crooner... kindof jumped on the Harry Connick, Jr. train, too -- sometimes, that rich voice is what is called for, ya know? :) :) Thanx for the review, Rikki -- you take care out there!! ;) Yvette
reply by Rikki66 on 01-Feb-2020
    You are too well put together to get discouraged. You are right about Sinatra, have you listened to Michael Buble.
    Rikki
Comment from royowen
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It seems to be a season for confession, I was reading a post about someone's lost love, many moons ago, and I was sucked into the vortex, it's funny how our lives pan out, that lost romantic notion...if only? But I'm really happy with my life, I'm not hanging on to a daisy over some precipice. Well done Yvette, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Content as is, Sir Roy!! ;) But the memories are a free smile from me to you!! ;) Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review!! ;) Yvette
reply by royowen on 31-Jan-2020
    Well done
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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You got it just right for the contest . I knew where you were going as I read the piece before I read the notes. Excellently done but I guess I'm showing my age.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Not at all, my friend -- I figure if they can still rock, I can still enjoy!! ;) :) Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Barb! ;) Yvette


Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Memories, aren't they wonderful? You can be selective with them, pick your nice ones and throw out the bad. This song reminded me a little of Pet Clark's song, Upon the Roof. Your well chosen words words say so much, my friend. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxxx

Thank you, again, for that lovely ecard. You brightened my day. :)) xxxx

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Aerosmith is one of those bands that seems to pump a bit of youthful back into today's emotions just cuz it recalls the freedoms of being a teenager (and the escapades that includes - lol!) -- wow!! What a different life and world!! :) :) Thanx for the review, Sandra! ;) Yvette

    You are so welcome! ;)