Devil of a Monster
Take Up Your Shield46 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
This is a great entry for the monster contest - from your attention grabbing title to the last lines of hope. Great illustration to enhance your message. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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This is a great entry for the monster contest - from your attention grabbing title to the last lines of hope. Great illustration to enhance your message. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly:)
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You are most welcome :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about the monster of negativity and hatred that take over your body, soul, and mind. Our only hope to fight and win this monster is Jesus Christ.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about the monster of negativity and hatred that take over your body, soul, and mind. Our only hope to fight and win this monster is Jesus Christ.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly:)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent description of what a monster is, but I am flummoxed, as I can't find the description of what makes him so. I take this to mean I am becoming sloppy, so should stop reviewing for now and go back to bed for a while. Sorry this conclusion fell on your piece - I will make it up to you once the secrecy ends...
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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This is an excellent description of what a monster is, but I am flummoxed, as I can't find the description of what makes him so. I take this to mean I am becoming sloppy, so should stop reviewing for now and go back to bed for a while. Sorry this conclusion fell on your piece - I will make it up to you once the secrecy ends...
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly:)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. You have written a rhyming and metered poem with a powerful message.
"But...be not discouraged and do not yield
The promise of Salvation is your shield."
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Hello mystery writer. You have written a rhyming and metered poem with a powerful message.
"But...be not discouraged and do not yield
The promise of Salvation is your shield."
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly:)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hello Mystery Author --
I do believe I know who you are as your signature style is woven well here -- and what an awesome offering for this contest!! ;) :) Thanx much for your testimony in well-written verse! ;) Good luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Hello Mystery Author --
I do believe I know who you are as your signature style is woven well here -- and what an awesome offering for this contest!! ;) :) Thanx much for your testimony in well-written verse! ;) Good luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly:)
Comment from Dancemom
This is a very good entry for the monster poetry contest. Your rhyming pattern and flow are well written. Your message of Satan as a monster and Jesus as a redeemer is well said. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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This is a very good entry for the monster poetry contest. Your rhyming pattern and flow are well written. Your message of Satan as a monster and Jesus as a redeemer is well said. Great job and thank you for sharing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly:)
