Devil of a Monster
Take Up Your Shield46 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear anonymous! You really do know the monsters lurking within.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
This should do well.
Blessings and a super-dooper squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear anonymous! You really do know the monsters lurking within.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
This should do well.
Blessings and a super-dooper squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Rebekka,
Thank so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Lots of love...Portia
Comment from dragonpoet
This moster is the devil. He makes monters out of those that can't fight him. This poem tells us faith always fights the monster.
Good luck in the contest,
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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This moster is the devil. He makes monters out of those that can't fight him. This poem tells us faith always fights the monster.
Good luck in the contest,
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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You are most kindly welcome, Portia.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have vividly described the characteristics of a monster. Monsters exist in numerous forms. You have also provided the answer--salvation through the Lord. Very well done
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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You have vividly described the characteristics of a monster. Monsters exist in numerous forms. You have also provided the answer--salvation through the Lord. Very well done
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Lu Saluna
This is an excellent contest entry and I wish you luck.
The poem has fantastic rhyme and meter which makes for a very smooth read. I enjoy reading poetry that just sings along. Even if it is drescribing a monster so eloquantly.
Well done
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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This is an excellent contest entry and I wish you luck.
The poem has fantastic rhyme and meter which makes for a very smooth read. I enjoy reading poetry that just sings along. Even if it is drescribing a monster so eloquantly.
Well done
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Susan Larson
I believe everything you have written is true except that all the monsters in my life have been women, jealous of me, competing with me, trying to squelch who I AM. No matter where they are, God's with me. Well written.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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I believe everything you have written is true except that all the monsters in my life have been women, jealous of me, competing with me, trying to squelch who I AM. No matter where they are, God's with me. Well written.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...Portia
Comment from Bicpen
... enticing and pulsing with a word use which could be elaborated to give a fuller sense of the monster waiting to devour divulge digest and dissect the human spirit of love to weak in the images though it draws on the idea to a degree it could be fuller and painted thicker to give a more darker sense of lurking and foreboding. It works in the simplicity it has chosen and agrees with the conclusion in a resolute and formidable fashion.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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... enticing and pulsing with a word use which could be elaborated to give a fuller sense of the monster waiting to devour divulge digest and dissect the human spirit of love to weak in the images though it draws on the idea to a degree it could be fuller and painted thicker to give a more darker sense of lurking and foreboding. It works in the simplicity it has chosen and agrees with the conclusion in a resolute and formidable fashion.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly:)
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anytime ...
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Awesome imagery of a monster! Monsters are definitely all that you note! I like also how you divided the poem between what a monster is and hope of protection from monsters!
Enjoyed reading very much! xoxo
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Awesome imagery of a monster! Monsters are definitely all that you note! I like also how you divided the poem between what a monster is and hope of protection from monsters!
Enjoyed reading very much! xoxo
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly:)
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xoxo very welcome
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author of the poem what makes a monster with all your perfect rhyming, plus how you described the monster evil ways. Gert
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Hello author of the poem what makes a monster with all your perfect rhyming, plus how you described the monster evil ways. Gert
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly:)
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You are welcome the blind writer.
Gert
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Many people turn to the church not knowing there are sometimes monsters inside. The worst of the is pedophile priests. Snatching young souls who look to them for guidance.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Many people turn to the church not knowing there are sometimes monsters inside. The worst of the is pedophile priests. Snatching young souls who look to them for guidance.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly:)
Comment from Harley Dayman Rayne Quinn
Well said But a woman could be just as much for a monster.
I know from personal experience but Men still trump the opposite sex. The Words were wonderful especially the last two lines
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Well said But a woman could be just as much for a monster.
I know from personal experience but Men still trump the opposite sex. The Words were wonderful especially the last two lines
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for you review and comments, I totally agree with you that a woman could be a monster as well, trust me I have met some. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...
