Devil of a Monster
Take Up Your Shield46 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Devil of a Monster", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. With craft and well honed skill this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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"Devil of a Monster", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. With craft and well honed skill this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Duchess,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings my friend...Portia
Comment from nomi338
Excellent. You do a fine job of pointing out that hate cannot eliminate hate, only love can do that. Darkness can never replace darkness, it takes light to do that. Everyone knows that God has power, he has majesty, divinity and so much more, but as John 4:8 states: God is love. Therefore if you align yourself with God, you will not be or ever become a monster.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Excellent. You do a fine job of pointing out that hate cannot eliminate hate, only love can do that. Darkness can never replace darkness, it takes light to do that. Everyone knows that God has power, he has majesty, divinity and so much more, but as John 4:8 states: God is love. Therefore if you align yourself with God, you will not be or ever become a monster.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very wise comments.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Stars for you, Pharp. There are many people who take advantage
of people for their own pride and ego. It can destroy precious
youth of their dream. God is our help and shield in times of trouble.
I like how you add this in the end as a great witness. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Stars for you, Pharp. There are many people who take advantage
of people for their own pride and ego. It can destroy precious
youth of their dream. God is our help and shield in times of trouble.
I like how you add this in the end as a great witness. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
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Nancy,
Thanks again for a six star rating, I really appreciate your review and wise comments. Blessings...Portia
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like your poem about the monster called Satan. Is that who you were referring to? To think about someone this horrible can be devastating. No one wants to have a friend who we call a monster!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Like your poem about the monster called Satan. Is that who you were referring to? To think about someone this horrible can be devastating. No one wants to have a friend who we call a monster!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Yes indeed, I was referring to Satan, Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from lance michaels
How true! I know this monster, his name was alcohol. He robbed me of my beautiful family, a home and a career. He robbed me of my morals and almost took my life. Satan was his true name but he was disguised as something else. Very powerful piece.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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How true! I know this monster, his name was alcohol. He robbed me of my beautiful family, a home and a career. He robbed me of my morals and almost took my life. Satan was his true name but he was disguised as something else. Very powerful piece.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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This monster in my case name is Jealousy and confusion for he has many names. He came into a loving family and caused jealousy among siblings and destroyed the unity that we once had. Thanks so much for your review, comes and sharing how the enemy came come in and do so much harm. But I am so thankful to God, for He always provide a way out, it is up to us to accept His grace and mercy. Blessings my friend...Portia
Comment from Tami Urbanek
That certainly describes a monster. One with no empathy or humanity-only wants and desires to cause pain. They seem to prey on those seeking a savior. Great piece! I like how it flowed.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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That certainly describes a monster. One with no empathy or humanity-only wants and desires to cause pain. They seem to prey on those seeking a savior. Great piece! I like how it flowed.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...Portia
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Pharp, thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Hello Pharp, thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, comments and best wishes...Blessings
Portia
Comment from TPAC
A strange positioning in my view of this write, ignoring this evil rather than trying to smash: suggested turn the cheek. You might be right not to bother. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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A strange positioning in my view of this write, ignoring this evil rather than trying to smash: suggested turn the cheek. You might be right not to bother. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings Portia
Comment from JanPerry
Although visually appealing there could be deeper overtones for this poem. Say, he had an evil father who beat him up or his one true love slept with someone else. There must be a reason for his behaviors. Dig deeper.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Although visually appealing there could be deeper overtones for this poem. Say, he had an evil father who beat him up or his one true love slept with someone else. There must be a reason for his behaviors. Dig deeper.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...Portia
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A monster is what a monster does, never yield to him, God's promise of salvation is your shield, let monster try hard to dismantle you, devil of a monster can never, well said, well done; pl sponsor me a m'ship; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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A monster is what a monster does, never yield to him, God's promise of salvation is your shield, let monster try hard to dismantle you, devil of a monster can never, well said, well done; pl sponsor me a m'ship; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated...Blessings
Portia
