monster
a poem4 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
Wow, such an insightful and impactful entry for this contest. You answered the specific question well - What makes a monster? I'm in awe. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Wow, such an insightful and impactful entry for this contest. You answered the specific question well - What makes a monster? I'm in awe. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars to light my way, cheers.
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You are very welcome. Well-deserved.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a sad tale, told in a poetic setting. As to whether such a background inevitably creates a monster is, however arguable. It is true that many criminals have a background in 'care less' care homes (good use of the two words rather than the single 'careless', by the way), but it is also a fact that not all those who attended such homes turn out bad in the end. There has to be another ingredient and, whether that lies within the 'monster' himself, or is the result of some other outside agency, it needs to be identified, and so often it is not.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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This is a sad tale, told in a poetic setting. As to whether such a background inevitably creates a monster is, however arguable. It is true that many criminals have a background in 'care less' care homes (good use of the two words rather than the single 'careless', by the way), but it is also a fact that not all those who attended such homes turn out bad in the end. There has to be another ingredient and, whether that lies within the 'monster' himself, or is the result of some other outside agency, it needs to be identified, and so often it is not.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Some kids are raised in loving families with all the blessings.. and yet they can turn bad also. I do know they we all need the human touch to keep us grounded and loved. Thanks for the review, cheers.
Comment from kahpot
Very well done, though I think care less should be one word (careless), yes one act can bring out the monster, and sometimes our upbringing, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Very well done, though I think care less should be one word (careless), yes one act can bring out the monster, and sometimes our upbringing, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the insightful review. Who knows what makes people turn away, to become evil.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer, a happy Tuesday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Hello fellow writer, a happy Tuesday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review. Who knows what makes people turn bad. Not just childhood situations because those that were raised with loving families and all the blessings could turn evil also, cheers.
