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Comment from padumachitta
Hello I am back, do you remember me?
I will try again for a while.
I gave this a six because the writing is just so clean. I read this without background and still really enjoyed it. i was curious about the characters, worried about motives and engaged. That then deserves every star I can find.
Keep writing,
padumachitta
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Hello I am back, do you remember me?
I will try again for a while.
I gave this a six because the writing is just so clean. I read this without background and still really enjoyed it. i was curious about the characters, worried about motives and engaged. That then deserves every star I can find.
Keep writing,
padumachitta
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Lovely to hear from you again, padumachitta. Thank you so much for your review and kind words. I appreciate the sixth star. Most affirming! All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Much drama in this chapter Tony. Written well and the dialogue made me fee I was there with them firstly when Ash was overpowered and then in Mozama's house. That was a good twist with Kayla stealing the briefcase of money. One determined gal.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Much drama in this chapter Tony. Written well and the dialogue made me fee I was there with them firstly when Ash was overpowered and then in Mozama's house. That was a good twist with Kayla stealing the briefcase of money. One determined gal.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Very many thanks, Valda, for your encouragement and for the sixth star. Much appreciated, as always. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from lyenochka
Superbly done chapter with lots of surprise twists and turns plus comedy such as the Monty Python reference. It seems that Mozama has thought of everything to prepare Charles. There is also a reminder to be humane even to a terrible enemy like Ash, to care for his wound even after he threatened Charles.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Superbly done chapter with lots of surprise twists and turns plus comedy such as the Monty Python reference. It seems that Mozama has thought of everything to prepare Charles. There is also a reminder to be humane even to a terrible enemy like Ash, to care for his wound even after he threatened Charles.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your comments, Helen. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. All the best, Tony
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again you added a wonderful addition to your already good novel. I can't wait to see if the men will get to Kayla before she gets herself into trouble. Will Helen be safe and will she and Charles ever get together? I can't wait to find the answers.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Once again you added a wonderful addition to your already good novel. I can't wait to see if the men will get to Kayla before she gets herself into trouble. Will Helen be safe and will she and Charles ever get together? I can't wait to find the answers.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your comments, Barbara, and for the sixth star. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. All the best, Tony
Comment from Cindy Warren
I knew there was something off about Ash. I have a feeling he's not done making trouble. Good thing Chaprasi knocked him out, but he'll be awake soon enough. Did Kayla guess something was up with the case, or did she just cut it because Ash still had the key? I can't wait to see how they get Helen back.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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I knew there was something off about Ash. I have a feeling he's not done making trouble. Good thing Chaprasi knocked him out, but he'll be awake soon enough. Did Kayla guess something was up with the case, or did she just cut it because Ash still had the key? I can't wait to see how they get Helen back.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Very many thanks, Cindy, for your review the affirmation of a sixth star. Kayla had guessed that might be how things were set up. In an earlier chapter, she mentioned a similar device being used when she was in Phuket.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love that you start this chapter off talking about a briefcase of cash. I often tell people I am looking for one and if they find it we can split it. Then the briefcase it at the end I feel completing the chapter in a small way after the unintentional insult made with the Kayber knife.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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I love that you start this chapter off talking about a briefcase of cash. I often tell people I am looking for one and if they find it we can split it. Then the briefcase it at the end I feel completing the chapter in a small way after the unintentional insult made with the Kayber knife.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for your review, Mia. A suitcase full of cash would come in handy, wouldn't it? Keep looking!
Comment from Sankey
This was a great chapter. Sorry you are late and have missed the SIXES for another week. This had plenty of drama and some interesting solutions to seeming problems. No spags. I am curious about the extension of trams in Adelaide.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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This was a great chapter. Sorry you are late and have missed the SIXES for another week. This had plenty of drama and some interesting solutions to seeming problems. No spags. I am curious about the extension of trams in Adelaide.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks very much for your review, Geoffrey. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from Ulla
hi Tony, the two timing is telling, but now somebody unexpected has come to the rescue. I loved this chapter and it becomes obvious that Kayla cannot be trusted. But what the really issue is still eludes me. That's a sign of good writing and plotting. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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hi Tony, the two timing is telling, but now somebody unexpected has come to the rescue. I loved this chapter and it becomes obvious that Kayla cannot be trusted. But what the really issue is still eludes me. That's a sign of good writing and plotting. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks very much for your review, Ulla, and the affirmation of a sixth star. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from damommy
An exciting chapter, and good dialogue. I especially like the way Chaprasi whacked Ash with the sock blackjack. I hope Charles makes it in time and doesn't have to use the knife hidden in his clothing. Good touch to put him local clothing.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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An exciting chapter, and good dialogue. I especially like the way Chaprasi whacked Ash with the sock blackjack. I hope Charles makes it in time and doesn't have to use the knife hidden in his clothing. Good touch to put him local clothing.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks very much for your review, Yvonne. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from Mistydawn
The plot thickens even more. I hope they're able to find her, clear up this mess and rescue Hellen. It puzzles me how Ash acted the way he did, like it was a set up or something. Maybe I'm reading to much into it. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting, suspenseful. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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The plot thickens even more. I hope they're able to find her, clear up this mess and rescue Hellen. It puzzles me how Ash acted the way he did, like it was a set up or something. Maybe I'm reading to much into it. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting, suspenseful. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks very much for your review, Dawn. I appreciate your comments. Best wishes, Tony.
