Unbridled
5-7-9 Poetry Contest Entry14 total reviews
Comment from LyndaS
This write is a definite cry for freedom coated in the untethered breeze of escapism. Though this is a dream of yours, these words make me think these thoughts of yours ride close to your conscious surface. You have chosen the perfect art to enhance your poem. Excellent presentation with a powerful message. Just beautiful, author. This will do well in the booth. Good luck. Lynda
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This write is a definite cry for freedom coated in the untethered breeze of escapism. Though this is a dream of yours, these words make me think these thoughts of yours ride close to your conscious surface. You have chosen the perfect art to enhance your poem. Excellent presentation with a powerful message. Just beautiful, author. This will do well in the booth. Good luck. Lynda
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Wow, thank you for the fantastic review and big sixer, Lynda. One of the best reviews I've ever gotten on this site. I'm glad you liked my little offering. I hope you have a wonderful day and thank you again.
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Any time.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is an excellent contest entry, meeting the meter requirements. The phrases are engaging and convey a clear message of one who wants to live out his/her wildest dreams.
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This poem is an excellent contest entry, meeting the meter requirements. The phrases are engaging and convey a clear message of one who wants to live out his/her wildest dreams.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Susan. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from May 1
I love this poem because it is so powerful. Your choice of vocabulary is splendid and I can feel the energy radiating from this poem. Also, I love how well this image works with this poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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I love this poem because it is so powerful. Your choice of vocabulary is splendid and I can feel the energy radiating from this poem. Also, I love how well this image works with this poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, May. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Gloria ....
Well when you put it that way, yes freedom path on the way.
Excellent poem and I can feel the urge to fly away into the unknown, not only with your artwork but a well crafted entry into this contest.
Best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
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Well when you put it that way, yes freedom path on the way.
Excellent poem and I can feel the urge to fly away into the unknown, not only with your artwork but a well crafted entry into this contest.
Best of luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for the kind review, Gloria. I dearly appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a great day.
