Unbridled
5-7-9 Poetry Contest Entry14 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi DragonSkulls. A lovely poem and has many meanings a good second place. The words suited you image good choice congratulations, I was happy to place third Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Hi DragonSkulls. A lovely poem and has many meanings a good second place. The words suited you image good choice congratulations, I was happy to place third Cheers Christine
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Christine. Yeah, we were neck and neck through most of it. I dearly appreciate the kind comments and rating, C. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful upcoming weekend.
Ron
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-9 poem about being a wild horse cherish the dream about still roaming free and unbridled on undestined paths of own choice.
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A very well-written 5-7-9 poem about being a wild horse cherish the dream about still roaming free and unbridled on undestined paths of own choice.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Sandra. Ia'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a wonderful night.
Ron
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I've of late been writing on Quora about Myers-Briggs personality types. So this poem reminds me of INFP a reflective, broad horizon, exhilarated free of any restrictions. This is a great image for the reader to enjoy and possible identify with. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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I've of late been writing on Quora about Myers-Briggs personality types. So this poem reminds me of INFP a reflective, broad horizon, exhilarated free of any restrictions. This is a great image for the reader to enjoy and possible identify with. Well expressed.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and generous stars, Liz. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. Unbridled is an excellent title for this poem. You make the rules for the 5-7-9 poem but you also told story. The story is from the perspective of the galloping horse. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Hello mystery writer. Unbridled is an excellent title for this poem. You make the rules for the 5-7-9 poem but you also told story. The story is from the perspective of the galloping horse. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Robert. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You're welcome
Comment from victor 66
For many, such freedom is just a dream. Your five - seven - nine poem says it all in sixteen words. Speaking of which, your words flow very nicely and were a pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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For many, such freedom is just a dream. Your five - seven - nine poem says it all in sixteen words. Speaking of which, your words flow very nicely and were a pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and stars, Victor. Yes, freedom is quite often just a dream to many of us. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
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You are most welcome, it was my pleasure.
Comment from Minglement
You create a lovely picture with this entry for the contest. What a gorgeous image you found to go with your lovely word picture. I feel the emotion. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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You create a lovely picture with this entry for the contest. What a gorgeous image you found to go with your lovely word picture. I feel the emotion. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind review and generous stars, Minglement. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
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You are welcome :)
Comment from Dancemom
This is a beautiful poem about chasing dreams and that no matter what age we are, we can still chase new dreams. You earned my vote in the 579 contest. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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This is a beautiful poem about chasing dreams and that no matter what age we are, we can still chase new dreams. You earned my vote in the 579 contest. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Wow, thank you so much for the kind review and the giant sixer, Heather. I dearly appreciate the support and generous rating. Yes, we need to always keep chasing. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Thank you again and have a wonderful day.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds that you may now be shackled by your commitments now and yearn for those days you write about here, I enjoyed the freedom within these words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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It sounds that you may now be shackled by your commitments now and yearn for those days you write about here, I enjoyed the freedom within these words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Dolly. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of remembered unbridled freedom.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of remembered unbridled freedom.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and stars, Sharon. I'm glad you liked my little offering.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, a terrific Tuesday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-9 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Hello fellow poet, a terrific Tuesday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-9 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Hey, 13, hi. Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great day.
