A Matter of Mind
A 5-7-9 Contest Offering25 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
5-7-9 is a new one on me and it allows for some expansion from the shorter forms. You have made good use of the extra space with a telling oxymoron (silence screaming) that is a comment on the pressure silence can create. That is a fact well understood by both interrogators and salesmen.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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5-7-9 is a new one on me and it allows for some expansion from the shorter forms. You have made good use of the extra space with a telling oxymoron (silence screaming) that is a comment on the pressure silence can create. That is a fact well understood by both interrogators and salesmen.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the wonderful review -- I am so glad that you found the depth I tried to put into this one... Happy Tuesday out there!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely little poem. The words have a good flow to them and convey a simple message. The picture is a great addition. I enjoyed reading this one.
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This is a lovely little poem. The words have a good flow to them and convey a simple message. The picture is a great addition. I enjoyed reading this one.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the wonderful review, Susan -- I am so glad that you found the depth I tried to put into this one... Happy Tuesday out there!
Comment from May 1
Wow, that is such a powerful poem, wonderfully written. I feel like this is very true. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem and love the image you chose for this one.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Wow, that is such a powerful poem, wonderfully written. I feel like this is very true. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem and love the image you chose for this one.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the wonderful review, May -- I am so glad that you found the depth I tried to put into this one... Happy Tuesday out there!
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
Ohhhh, I love the opposition of silence and its screaming. I enjoy such contradictions. This is a short, but very compelling and powerful thought that hits me with the desire to meditate on it. Your art choice is sharp and hits home, too.
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Ohhhh, I love the opposition of silence and its screaming. I enjoy such contradictions. This is a short, but very compelling and powerful thought that hits me with the desire to meditate on it. Your art choice is sharp and hits home, too.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Oh, Marilyn, THANK YOU for such awesome comments as well as those bright, shiny stars! I am so happy that you found the depth I tried to put into this one... Have a wonderful week!
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:) welcome
Comment from Ricky1024
i"S Matter of Mind'
Is a 5-7-9 writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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i"S Matter of Mind'
Is a 5-7-9 writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review!!
