My Valentine Lost
A Rhyming contest entry...12 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Diana, This is a very beautiful and well written rhyming poem you have penned for your sister on this day. You used very loving words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose too. I am so sorry for her loss. May God bless you both! love, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Diana, This is a very beautiful and well written rhyming poem you have penned for your sister on this day. You used very loving words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose too. I am so sorry for her loss. May God bless you both! love, Teri
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you for you condolences. She has been able to meet someone who has helped to ease her paint, and so happy for that as her fella would not have wanted her to suffer all her life. xoxo
Comment from judiverse
That picture helps to convey your sad message. Valentine's Day is a time to think of all of those who have lost loved ones in wartime. The bereaved woman in your poem is left with only memories of the service member she lost. May be find peace and may her loved one be remembered for his service. Excellent rhyme and flow, and best of luck in the contest. Great entry. judi
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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That picture helps to convey your sad message. Valentine's Day is a time to think of all of those who have lost loved ones in wartime. The bereaved woman in your poem is left with only memories of the service member she lost. May be find peace and may her loved one be remembered for his service. Excellent rhyme and flow, and best of luck in the contest. Great entry. judi
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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It is amazing when I find pictures like this that just tell the story itself! appreciate your kind words of support for this piece! xoxo
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Commando
An "AWESOME" penning for the contest, Diana! "Astonishing" Art Work. Your Profile is "Extremely Impressive." A "SALUTE" for your service to God and Country...and my condolences on your sister's loss. This is most deserving of a six star; yet, I haven't any. Best wishes for a contest win and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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An "AWESOME" penning for the contest, Diana! "Astonishing" Art Work. Your Profile is "Extremely Impressive." A "SALUTE" for your service to God and Country...and my condolences on your sister's loss. This is most deserving of a six star; yet, I haven't any. Best wishes for a contest win and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thank you Bill! I really do love yours too, and hopefully, we will both continue to do well! I think others can relate to loss on a day such as Valentine?s Day! Appreciate your kind words. xoxo
Comment from Carl DeVere
Thank you for yet another great Romanticist poem. As a bonus, you also honor the memory of those who died serving their country and those who are tragically left behind. A sweet heart tug. We'll done.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thank you for yet another great Romanticist poem. As a bonus, you also honor the memory of those who died serving their country and those who are tragically left behind. A sweet heart tug. We'll done.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much! Since my sister experienced this kind of loss some years ago, I know how bittersweet Valentine?s Day is for those who lose their lover. xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is very sad Diana and I think many wives suffered like this during this war and wars in the past. Your touching words here are well rhymed and a great tribute to all war heroes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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This is very sad Diana and I think many wives suffered like this during this war and wars in the past. Your touching words here are well rhymed and a great tribute to all war heroes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much. I can only imagine how bittersweet this day is. I?m sure you know better than I. xoxoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a meaningful poem. The image is just so gorgeous. Servicemen and servicewomen who have died and served our country, will be remembered by their families. Evidently your sister lost her husband. Sympathy.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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What a meaningful poem. The image is just so gorgeous. Servicemen and servicewomen who have died and served our country, will be remembered by their families. Evidently your sister lost her husband. Sympathy.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thank you, it has been hard for her. He died in 2010, and finally, two years ago, she met someone who is helping her to heal. Appreciate your precious words. xoxo
Comment from Ricky1024
"My Valentinr Lost' is a Rhyming Valentine's Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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"My Valentinr Lost' is a Rhyming Valentine's Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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thanks my friend! xoxo
Comment from Ronni
A haunting and heartbreaking memory recall of a lost loved one,
conveyed ever so tenderly, pic scene so vividly capturing the
tremulous emotions of perpetual farewell of flowers that were
so preciously held, now laid on resting place below heavens
skies and earthly sod, in Lord's everlasting peace and rest. A
most misty eyed Valentine memoir and tribute expressed.
Thanks for sharing and consoling. Sincerest condolences
on the loss of your dearest sister. This is a keepsake tribute for her indeed.
(I lost 2 son's 18 months apart in Iraq war, thus this scene is
emotively familiar and relateable; as it is to so many others who
have lost loved ones in service to their country)
Best wishes, Ronni
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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A haunting and heartbreaking memory recall of a lost loved one,
conveyed ever so tenderly, pic scene so vividly capturing the
tremulous emotions of perpetual farewell of flowers that were
so preciously held, now laid on resting place below heavens
skies and earthly sod, in Lord's everlasting peace and rest. A
most misty eyed Valentine memoir and tribute expressed.
Thanks for sharing and consoling. Sincerest condolences
on the loss of your dearest sister. This is a keepsake tribute for her indeed.
(I lost 2 son's 18 months apart in Iraq war, thus this scene is
emotively familiar and relateable; as it is to so many others who
have lost loved ones in service to their country)
Best wishes, Ronni
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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I'm so sorry to hear this about your son's. I can't imagine the pain of losing a child let alone 2 children. thank you for sharing that with me. My heart aches for you, my friend. It was actually my sister's boyfriend who was killed in Afghanistan and she mourned his loss for many years. Thankfully, she met someone about 2 years ago that has helped bring her back to life. Much love. xoxo
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Thank you for your empathy,
am doing fine, was 5 yrs ago,
and since much solace came
from families support group who have lost loved ones in
war. We have regular meetings and social outings,
and is beneficial to all.
Thanks again,
Love, Ronni
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I?m happy to know you have that kind of support around you. I?m still keeping you in my prayers though. xoxo
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Thank you dear. A most touching appreciation dear
friend.
Always, Ronni
Comment from Sally Law
You aremsuch a dear. Yes, I have many relatives and friends who qualify for this one. A sweet poem of love ended too soon. So sorry for your loss, dear Diana.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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You aremsuch a dear. Yes, I have many relatives and friends who qualify for this one. A sweet poem of love ended too soon. So sorry for your loss, dear Diana.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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My heart goes out to those who experience such loss. My sister lost her boyfriend in 2010, and she was devastated for many years. She finally met someone about 2 years ago and seems to be moving on finally. War is a cruel thing. :(. Thanks for reading and appreciating. Hope you have a wonderful week! xoxo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is so lovely and moving. Your well-written lines have conveyed a powerful message about love and the pain of losing someone to death. On special days like Valentine's Day, that pain, for some, is intensified.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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This is so lovely and moving. Your well-written lines have conveyed a powerful message about love and the pain of losing someone to death. On special days like Valentine's Day, that pain, for some, is intensified.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Thank you Janice! My heart goes out to those that cannot enjoy this lover?s day as they once did. Appreciate you took time to read! xoxo
