The Fae Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Drinking Buddies"Still just a germ of an idea that the moment
3 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
Ah, I loved it, Snod. I guess I've got my sense of humor back. I chuckled at a lot of the interplay between your characters. Your smart wit is working double time in this chapter. Lots of irony, which could almost come off as sarcasm, given the nature of your characters. Lol! I loved all the well pitched dialogue. Way to go, Snod. I was well entertained. Do it again, please.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Ah, I loved it, Snod. I guess I've got my sense of humor back. I chuckled at a lot of the interplay between your characters. Your smart wit is working double time in this chapter. Lots of irony, which could almost come off as sarcasm, given the nature of your characters. Lol! I loved all the well pitched dialogue. Way to go, Snod. I was well entertained. Do it again, please.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020
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Aw, thanks. Glad you liked it
Comment from Ricky1024
"Drinking Buddies"
Was well-written and Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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"Drinking Buddies"
Was well-written and Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
What an amazing chapter! I love fantasy. Its amazing idea to have faires, elves, and other magical creatures in the story. I feel bad for Peter because of his alchol problem and losing his job. The only errors I saw was "Bib sighed. "You know the definition of a friend?" It should be Bob sighed. God Bless you and I enjoyed your chapter.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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What an amazing chapter! I love fantasy. Its amazing idea to have faires, elves, and other magical creatures in the story. I feel bad for Peter because of his alchol problem and losing his job. The only errors I saw was "Bib sighed. "You know the definition of a friend?" It should be Bob sighed. God Bless you and I enjoyed your chapter.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Bless you for reviewing it. Thanks for the spag and I'm glad you liked it.
