Ethereal Encounter
For the Mountain 5-7-5 contest14 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Very aptly named, this 5-7-5 poem provides a stirring contrast between the tough, unyielding mountain top and the starry sky that appears so soft and delicate as to be almost magical.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Very aptly named, this 5-7-5 poem provides a stirring contrast between the tough, unyielding mountain top and the starry sky that appears so soft and delicate as to be almost magical.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Many thanks for your lovely comments!
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Nice Job on Ethereal Encounter. I'm new to 5-7-5 poetry, and I noticed on line three you wrote heav'n, in place of heaven. Will keep that in mind for my next attempt. Thanks
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Nice Job on Ethereal Encounter. I'm new to 5-7-5 poetry, and I noticed on line three you wrote heav'n, in place of heaven. Will keep that in mind for my next attempt. Thanks
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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My sincere thanks for your excellent review, Frank - it is most appreciated! Be sure to stop by again some time and have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the 575 mountain contest. Your syllable count is correct assuming heav'n is one syllable. Your use of alliteration describes the picture of the mountain under the stars very well. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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This is a great entry for the 575 mountain contest. Your syllable count is correct assuming heav'n is one syllable. Your use of alliteration describes the picture of the mountain under the stars very well. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Many thanks for your lovely comments!
Comment from Joan E.
I was transported by the dramatic picture you selected and your dramatic presentation. I admired your use of alliteration and personification plus learned a new vocabulary word. Best wishes in the 5-7-5 contest- Joan
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I was transported by the dramatic picture you selected and your dramatic presentation. I admired your use of alliteration and personification plus learned a new vocabulary word. Best wishes in the 5-7-5 contest- Joan
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Many thanks for your lovely comments!
