Ethereal Encounter
For the Mountain 5-7-5 contest14 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
well, not only is that beautiful, but you taught me a new word!
Did not know "tor." fascinating word.
Such a pretty accompanying picture, too.
Well done, madame.
pome
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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well, not only is that beautiful, but you taught me a new word!
Did not know "tor." fascinating word.
Such a pretty accompanying picture, too.
Well done, madame.
pome
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Oh, Katharine, you are such a ray of sunshine!! :) Thank you for such an awesome review and I'm glad I had my teaching pants on and didn't even know it!! ;) I know I've told you before, but these shorties are just perfect for doing in a short period of time (which is what I usually have!)... don't even have to look up rhymes or anything!! ;) :) Thank you again, LoneStar Lady, and you take care for the rest of the week! ;) Yvette
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I may be a semi-tor - the craggy bit. :)
night,
K
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Congratulations, YM, on your first place win. Your 575 is excellent. I really enjoyed reading it. The alliteration of 's' and 'b' is great. Your well-chosen words paint an awesome picture. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Congratulations, YM, on your first place win. Your 575 is excellent. I really enjoyed reading it. The alliteration of 's' and 'b' is great. Your well-chosen words paint an awesome picture. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, Jan
Comment Written 27-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this one, Jan - the taller mountains are just an 'awesome' thing, aren't they?!! Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
That your poem won the contest is no surprise. It is vividly descriptive
and lovely. Personification and alliteration are excellent, and no syllables are wasted.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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That your poem won the contest is no surprise. It is vividly descriptive
and lovely. Personification and alliteration are excellent, and no syllables are wasted.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Janice, for the review on this one, my friend! ;) I've just always stood in awe of those taller mountains out west! :) Yvette
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Mountain writing prompt.
This short verse tells of the mountain brushing heaven.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Mountain writing prompt.
This short verse tells of the mountain brushing heaven.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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So glad you could find my awe written in this one, Sharon - the taller mountains are just an 'awesome' thing, aren't they?!! Thank you!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Such a beautiful poem. The scenery image is spectacular. The words are so expressive that it brings your picture to life. A very heartwarming poem that looks intriguing. Good job!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Such a beautiful poem. The scenery image is spectacular. The words are so expressive that it brings your picture to life. A very heartwarming poem that looks intriguing. Good job!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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So glad you could find my awe written in this one, Rosemary - the taller mountains are just an 'awesome' thing, aren't they?!! Thank you!
Comment from Therese Caron
Beautiful 5-7-5 poem. I love rugged in one line and soft facade in the next. Very effective. You also have a beautiful image complementing your poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Beautiful 5-7-5 poem. I love rugged in one line and soft facade in the next. Very effective. You also have a beautiful image complementing your poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much, Therese, for your review today!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 mountains poem. When we look up to the mountains that seem to reach the sky and touch the stars, we realize how small and ignificant we are.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 mountains poem. When we look up to the mountains that seem to reach the sky and touch the stars, we realize how small and ignificant we are.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much, Sandra, for stopping by today!
Comment from May 1
Wow, that is simply magical. I love the image that this creates in my mind and how you have chosen your words so perfectly. All in all, it was a true pleasure reading this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Wow, that is simply magical. I love the image that this creates in my mind and how you have chosen your words so perfectly. All in all, it was a true pleasure reading this poem.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Many thanks for your lovely comments!
Comment from kahpot
Outstanding, "boulder's brush with heav'n" these words may have just come straight out of this artwork, beautifully written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Outstanding, "boulder's brush with heav'n" these words may have just come straight out of this artwork, beautifully written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Many thanks for your wonderful comments!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked the kissing here as the mountain top appears to reach for the stars, the hard boulder being softened by the sparking stars, I liked the concept, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I liked the kissing here as the mountain top appears to reach for the stars, the hard boulder being softened by the sparking stars, I liked the concept, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Many thanks for your lovely comments!
