Sending A Message
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 15 syllable poem you have penned for the contest that is so true. You used great descriptive words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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This is a very well written 15 syllable poem you have penned for the contest that is so true. You used great descriptive words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you ,Teri, and blessings to you too. I still enjoy receiving hand written letters.
Comment from Gloria ....
I like this because you manage to cover a lot of history and the one thing always remain constant, and that is the human drive to communicate to a wider audience. Now we're all over the place, as you say, with smart phones.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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I like this because you manage to cover a lot of history and the one thing always remain constant, and that is the human drive to communicate to a wider audience. Now we're all over the place, as you say, with smart phones.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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If I had your number Gloria I would WhatsApp you with my appreciation of your continued encouragement.
Comment from Supe
This is perfect in count and presentation. A true story as well. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. A great contender I think. You found the perfect illustration.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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This is perfect in count and presentation. A true story as well. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. A great contender I think. You found the perfect illustration.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Your positive review is much appreciated. Thank you. I was fortunate indeed to find this perfect illustration.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation, persevere.
-Good to see your poems!
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and rhyme,
as well as alliteration.
-You did a good job
with a lot of poetic
devices and message with
only a few syllables.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation, persevere.
-Good to see your poems!
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and rhyme,
as well as alliteration.
-You did a good job
with a lot of poetic
devices and message with
only a few syllables.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much ,Pam, for taking the trouble to review my messaging piece and for giving my confidence a boost.
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You are quite welcome.