Stringing Me Along
5-7-5: Your love was not binding.10 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
It happens like this sometimes because when two become one flesh, your life is not your own. Everything that was just about you will come to an end. I like this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
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It happens like this sometimes because when two become one flesh, your life is not your own. Everything that was just about you will come to an end. I like this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
Comment from RShipp
What a grand picture for you haiku poem.
It's amazing how people seem to change when we can't wear rose-colored glasses 24-7.
Best wishes in the 5-7-5 prompt contest.
I enjoyed the read!
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What a grand picture for you haiku poem.
It's amazing how people seem to change when we can't wear rose-colored glasses 24-7.
Best wishes in the 5-7-5 prompt contest.
I enjoyed the read!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
Comment from May 1
That's so cleverly written. I loved reading this poem. Your choice of vocabulary is just perfect and the image you chose works perfectly with your poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
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That's so cleverly written. I loved reading this poem. Your choice of vocabulary is just perfect and the image you chose works perfectly with your poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
I therefore feel forced to respond by saying that you may have tied the wrong knot for the situation, a slip noose for a bowline perhaps. That can be dangerous.
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I therefore feel forced to respond by saying that you may have tied the wrong knot for the situation, a slip noose for a bowline perhaps. That can be dangerous.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
Comment from Fonda Little
I like the picture you used and the poem itself! Great job! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
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I like the picture you used and the poem itself! Great job! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
Comment from Susan X Smith
Ha, ha. I am guessing who wrote this but I won't say. I will check later. This is full of clever puns with a striking image to match. A story is told here in a few words.
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Ha, ha. I am guessing who wrote this but I won't say. I will check later. This is full of clever puns with a striking image to match. A story is told here in a few words.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever play on words and I enjoyed the meaning behind them too! A fine 5-7-5 and could be a winner for the contest, good luck, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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This is a clever play on words and I enjoyed the meaning behind them too! A fine 5-7-5 and could be a winner for the contest, good luck, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
That sounds like the marriage didn't work out like she planned. The hubby is probably controlling and she says she is stranded so my intuition tells me he is also physically and emotionally abusive! Too bad she couldn't realize something was severely wrong before the wedding!
Good job!
Patty
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That sounds like the marriage didn't work out like she planned. The hubby is probably controlling and she says she is stranded so my intuition tells me he is also physically and emotionally abusive! Too bad she couldn't realize something was severely wrong before the wedding!
Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of all of your syllables in this heart-wrenching piece that conveys a powerful message about the devastation that a broken marriage can leave behind.
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You have made effective use of all of your syllables in this heart-wrenching piece that conveys a powerful message about the devastation that a broken marriage can leave behind.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
Comment from Minglement
Ouch! Your last line caught me off guard and was such a sad ending. Nice artwork to accompany your melancholy write. No suggestions for improvement. I wish you luck in the contest.
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Ouch! Your last line caught me off guard and was such a sad ending. Nice artwork to accompany your melancholy write. No suggestions for improvement. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
