Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Poet,

There is a tree right outside my living room window and almost any moment I look up at it, there are squirrels or chipmunks running up and down its trunk. *smile* It makes me very happy. (I'm so easily pleased.)

That's what your poem reminded me of -- but then -- duh. haha

[One q: Do you mind if your description has a nit in it? The word 'squirrel' is misspelled there.] Other than that - you're in great shape. The syllable count is perfect and your post should have wide appeal.

Thanks for sharing and good luck!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Hey, thanks for the correction. I am a terrible speller as you can see.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Boy those critters are always hungry. I love how you are laser focused on your intent with this one. Your presentation is also delightful and you had me from word one. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Thank you for your read, Kiwi, and your encouraging workds.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sweet chirpy write about the squirrels having fun at breakfast time, I wish you luck with the contest, you made me smile here with this poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Thanks for your read and comments.