True Treasure
a 5-7-5 about what treasure is to me3 total reviews
Comment from May 1
That is so wonderfully said. It's the truth that some people refuse to see and I wish more people could be aware of that. I think that this poem is beautiful and I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
That is so wonderfully said. It's the truth that some people refuse to see and I wish more people could be aware of that. I think that this poem is beautiful and I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
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Thank you ever so much for your review. Appreciate your comments.
Comment from rspoet
You've written a wonderful 5-7-5 poem for the contest
that many on fanstory will agree with.
Excellent addition of the rhymes and very good presentation
with matching photo and colors
Well done
This should do nicely in the contest
Best wishes
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
You've written a wonderful 5-7-5 poem for the contest
that many on fanstory will agree with.
Excellent addition of the rhymes and very good presentation
with matching photo and colors
Well done
This should do nicely in the contest
Best wishes
Robert
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you so very much. I greatly appreciate your comments and best wishes.
Comment from Ricky1024
"True Treasure"
Is a 5-7-5 writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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While, Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
"True Treasure"
Is a 5-7-5 writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
While, Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Really appreciate your comments and good luck wish.