Discovering daily life
A typical day2 total reviews
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, This post is almost excellent , but you do the reader no favors by not letting them know what a cavalier is! You told me his name was Teddy and I am further confused because you you say "Our Cavalier Teddy" but at the beginning, and at the end imply that you live alone, except for the characters in the next story you are going to write in that study on the 2ed or 3rd floor of your house.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Dear Author, This post is almost excellent , but you do the reader no favors by not letting them know what a cavalier is! You told me his name was Teddy and I am further confused because you you say "Our Cavalier Teddy" but at the beginning, and at the end imply that you live alone, except for the characters in the next story you are going to write in that study on the 2ed or 3rd floor of your house.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Carl DeVere
Great shot at describing a day in only 100 words. I think you meant 1 am for hitting the pillow. And you only need less than 5 hours of sleep? And you prefer to share the details of your writing rather than your workday. That's what I got from what was not stated directly--oh yeah and you love your dog. He gets the only mention of your home life. But this is listed as fiction?
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Great shot at describing a day in only 100 words. I think you meant 1 am for hitting the pillow. And you only need less than 5 hours of sleep? And you prefer to share the details of your writing rather than your workday. That's what I got from what was not stated directly--oh yeah and you love your dog. He gets the only mention of your home life. But this is listed as fiction?
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya