Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Light As A Candle "Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine faithful write and I loved the shape here as your words cleverly warm our hearts, much enjoyed, the only thing missing is the flame, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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A fine faithful write and I loved the shape here as your words cleverly warm our hearts, much enjoyed, the only thing missing is the flame, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the review and compliments, After I saw the completed poem shape, I figured if the font was 1 size than now it might end up looking like a candle in a dish base?
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You could enlarge the (A) to make it look like a flame? Love Dolly x
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your Potlatch challenge, GM. Good job with its style. Your syllables are correct per line and carry much meaning about one's faith. I like the picture you paired with your poem. Your notes are true for all who believe. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed your Potlatch challenge, GM. Good job with its style. Your syllables are correct per line and carry much meaning about one's faith. I like the picture you paired with your poem. Your notes are true for all who believe. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Than you for your Great review, and your postings of diffently composed poetry, it is very Helpful Shared Knowledge.
Blessings to you.