family picnic
dueling limericks4 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! That's so funny. You've described that dreaded relative who doesn't know personal space and likes to give more than the normal amount of smooches.
Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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Lol! That's so funny. You've described that dreaded relative who doesn't know personal space and likes to give more than the normal amount of smooches.
Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
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And wears too much 'midnight in paris' perfume.
haha thanks for the review, cheers. j
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Congrats on First place! ;) You've created such cute little back/forth here - loved it! ;) :) Thank you so much for joining us for the 'Hugging Huddle' this week, ma'am! :) Have a great remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Congrats on First place! ;) You've created such cute little back/forth here - loved it! ;) :) Thank you so much for joining us for the 'Hugging Huddle' this week, ma'am! :) Have a great remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Cheers. It was fun to write. Good contest dear, j
Comment from RodG
I appreciate any limerick that can make me chuckle, and yours did. I enjoyed meeting the aunt from Taloosa and seeing the reaction of her nephews after they were swept up in her grasp. Rod
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I appreciate any limerick that can make me chuckle, and yours did. I enjoyed meeting the aunt from Taloosa and seeing the reaction of her nephews after they were swept up in her grasp. Rod
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Cheers, thanks for the review. I had fun writing this one.
Comment from xvi
I like that you kept to the form, and the poem is indeed humorous and a bit on the cruder side. But I can see the nephews attempting to escape the "perfume" from the aunt from Taloosa. But I'm wondering if there were chuckles in the room as young people seem to love humor based on gaseous escapes.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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I like that you kept to the form, and the poem is indeed humorous and a bit on the cruder side. But I can see the nephews attempting to escape the "perfume" from the aunt from Taloosa. But I'm wondering if there were chuckles in the room as young people seem to love humor based on gaseous escapes.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Haha she did not fart, it was her strong perfume that weakened them. I can just see the young nephews avoiding this lovable aunt that loves to hug, cheers.
