Lines of Life
contest entry40 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author of your entry for the Abstract art poem contest. Your post Lines of Life. I enjoyed reading it.
The rhyming pattern is excellent. The best to you in the contest. Gert
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Hello unknown author of your entry for the Abstract art poem contest. Your post Lines of Life. I enjoyed reading it.
The rhyming pattern is excellent. The best to you in the contest. Gert
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome. Gert
Comment from royowen
Well done with this very smooth, bright and shining, upbeat rhyming work. The beauty you imbue in your delightful words, brings sunlight to darkened fells, Beautifully written in lovely tetrameter, and adorned with the most natural rhymes, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Well done with this very smooth, bright and shining, upbeat rhyming work. The beauty you imbue in your delightful words, brings sunlight to darkened fells, Beautifully written in lovely tetrameter, and adorned with the most natural rhymes, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you for such a very kind review.
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Welcome
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Abstract Art Poem contest.
This verse tells of the lines in the abstract art picture, running through the poet's life.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Abstract Art Poem contest.
This verse tells of the lines in the abstract art picture, running through the poet's life.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review , very kind comments and best wishes...
Comment from Susan Larson
I love your use of lunes to express the connectedness between God and man. In some faiths there appears to be no connection between the two realms. In some, only a vertical line. In the Christian faith, there is the vertical line to God and the horizontal line between His Son and all of mankind, opening up all kinds of multi-lineal ways to connect with God. At least that's what I "read between the lines." : )
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I love your use of lunes to express the connectedness between God and man. In some faiths there appears to be no connection between the two realms. In some, only a vertical line. In the Christian faith, there is the vertical line to God and the horizontal line between His Son and all of mankind, opening up all kinds of multi-lineal ways to connect with God. At least that's what I "read between the lines." : )
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and the six star rating, you just made my day.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written abstract art poem about seeing the lines of life we received. Some of the lines are determined by God and we cannot change those lines. The ones we are able to change will depend on the choices we made.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A very well-written abstract art poem about seeing the lines of life we received. Some of the lines are determined by God and we cannot change those lines. The ones we are able to change will depend on the choices we made.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Gail Denham
Well done with your poem - and indeed "child of the King, saved by grace" - with God in my soul. And God in our lives - fully. You've said it clearly - we have several grandkids I sure wish could see this truth.
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Well done with your poem - and indeed "child of the King, saved by grace" - with God in my soul. And God in our lives - fully. You've said it clearly - we have several grandkids I sure wish could see this truth.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your very kind review and rating.
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed your faith-filled poem. My favorite line was the repeat of ... the lines of life have entered my soul... You did a wonderful job with this. I would mention that one of the letters is not in the same font as the others. Looks odd. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed your faith-filled poem. My favorite line was the repeat of ... the lines of life have entered my soul... You did a wonderful job with this. I would mention that one of the letters is not in the same font as the others. Looks odd. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Thanks for bringing the out of order font to my attention.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautifully written poem you have penned for the Abstract art poem contest. You used great descriptive words that went so well with the lovely imagery you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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This is a very beautifully written poem you have penned for the Abstract art poem contest. You used great descriptive words that went so well with the lovely imagery you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Woww!! It was such an amazing piece of writing. You're possessed with such a wonderful talent. I loved it and enjoyed reading it completely. I hope you'll go miles as a writer. Wishing you luck.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Woww!! It was such an amazing piece of writing. You're possessed with such a wonderful talent. I loved it and enjoyed reading it completely. I hope you'll go miles as a writer. Wishing you luck.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
Your very kind comments just made my day. Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A lovely faith-testimony interpretation of this piece of abstract art - your repetitive use of the 'line' motif as metaphor is very well done throughout your quatrains of aabb rhyme! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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A lovely faith-testimony interpretation of this piece of abstract art - your repetitive use of the 'line' motif as metaphor is very well done throughout your quatrains of aabb rhyme! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
God who is -> God who's [suggestion for flow...:)]
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank so much for your review and kind comments.
