Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I like the end stanza about not knowing who they will be and one day we all meet god and he doesn't care. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Great picture.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem uses reptiion and the metaphor of a line linking all things in life, from brith until death. It alludes to what faith brings us.
God luck and keep writing'
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review. Blessings

reply by dragonpoet on 22-Jan-2020

You are so very welcome.
dp

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

I liked how you used the 'lines for the abstract' as the premise to the lines that you described in your stanzas about your life.

Well done.

Best of luck in the Abstract art poem contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from Dancemom

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem describing both personal faith and the abstract art that you chose. Your rhyming pattern works well and I love how you repeated the one line each stanza for extra effect. Great job!

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

It is indeed a great picture but, it's your rhymed piece that steals the show! You have written a wonderful poem that shows the reader how you feel and enlightens us as well. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review.

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello mystery writer. You are certainly able to find a piece of abstract art as your background for the poem. Your message is a spiritual one and I don't see that as abstract. The poem speaks of faith and faith is real. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for such a kind review.

Blessings...

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 22-Jan-2020

You're welcome

Comment from Tina Crute

Excellent

Great entry for the contest! The picture is as abstract as the poem. This is one of those poems that needs to be read again because it's so good! Thanks for sharing a beautiful poem.
Tina

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for such a kind review.

Blessings

reply by Tina Crute on 21-Jan-2020

You're very welcome!

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

A beautifully scripted poem but a bit difficult to read with the font chosen. Maybe is was the colouring of the font. In any case, it is a lovely poem. It flows quite well and love the rhyme, especially Abraham.
Drew

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review and input. I have changed the font, I pray that one can read it a lot better now. Thanks again...
Blessings

reply by Drew Delaney on 21-Jan-2020

I looked and it is so much better.

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thank you once again.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This could have been entered in the Faith prompt as well, an excellent poem describing this wonderful artwork, I love the way you have woven your words around the artworks title, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thanks for your review, kind comments and best wishes.

Comment from zlp22

Excellent

Very interesting. I like the color but the writing is a little hard to read maybe it should be a different color. Great picture. That type of poem is not easy to write. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review.