Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is a beautiful piece of poetry dear anonymous! I think you have managed to convey your philosopy of life.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hello
A thoughtful, well written poem for this art poem contest.

It works we'll with the rhymes and the short stanzas

Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your poem is creatively-composed, vividly descriptive, deeply spiritual, and thought-provoking. Paralleling spiritual and personal changes with lines--creative approach.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review. Blessings

Comment from Therese Caron

Excellent

Beautiful poem for the abstract art contest! I particularly like the third stanza. The entire poem is clear and concise, very graceful, and has a lot to say. The abstract art you used to accompany the poem is striking. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thank you for such an outstanding review and best wishes.

Blessings...

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I loved how you took the abstract art poem and made it into this unique poem. I think we all have different lines in our lives that made us who we are today. Great job

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem about God. I have enjoyed reading this poem. It is very inspiring and positive. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review. Blessings...

reply by Raul1 on 23-Jan-2020

You're welcome

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

This poem is areally good description of the abstract artwork. I love your presentation, it is so eye catching.
I wish you lots of luck in the comoetition. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Your poem has a lovely rhyme and rhythm to it, making it flow so smoothly through the stanzas. I liked how you bagan the first stanzas with the same line, it strengthened your words and added to them. I think your poem is an excellent acknowledgement of your faith in God. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done and good luck. Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for an outstanding review,

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Abstract art and truth within this one. I enjoyed your contest entry so much, mystery poet. A deep thread of your faith is woven throughout. God's sovereignty, our free will, and His divine workmanship are weaving such a beautiful tapestry. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :)

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and best wishes.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hello anon, this is a really great poem for the contest. I saw the requirements and decided I didn't have a clue how to approach this one. You have done it - and made it a faith poem to-boot. That repeating line
'The lines of life entered my soul' - is very effective. Great picture and general display. Good Luck - Dorothy x

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020

Thanks so much for such an outstanding review.