Lines of Life
contest entry40 total reviews
Comment from zanya
These two pieces of Art written and visual seem like they were made for each other - how well they reflect each other -the poem exploring effectively purpose of life here on earth
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
These two pieces of Art written and visual seem like they were made for each other - how well they reflect each other -the poem exploring effectively purpose of life here on earth
Comment Written 26-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments....
Comment from rspoet
Hello Author,
You've written an excellent poem for the abstract art contest
that, in a straightforward way, turns the abstraction to
concrete paths that determine direction.
"Free will line was given to me
making the right choice is the key."
Choosing the spirit line is core to destiny.
Excellent rhymes and meter with the bold coloring and font.
Well done
Best wishes to you
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
Hello Author,
You've written an excellent poem for the abstract art contest
that, in a straightforward way, turns the abstraction to
concrete paths that determine direction.
"Free will line was given to me
making the right choice is the key."
Choosing the spirit line is core to destiny.
Excellent rhymes and meter with the bold coloring and font.
Well done
Best wishes to you
Robert
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for such an outstanding review...
Comment from LisaMay
You've done a great job with this poem, the aabb couplets work well, with a natural rhythm for flow.The words "lines of life" have triggered an uplifting line of spiritual thought for you to follow.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
You've done a great job with this poem, the aabb couplets work well, with a natural rhythm for flow.The words "lines of life" have triggered an uplifting line of spiritual thought for you to follow.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments....
Comment from Alchera
A good written felt poem throughout its built construction rhymed format layout, flow, refrain.and spiritual narrative storylined content.
Some missing punctuation is necessary.
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
A good written felt poem throughout its built construction rhymed format layout, flow, refrain.and spiritual narrative storylined content.
Some missing punctuation is necessary.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments...
Comment from Mackenzie Schmidt
Your poem the Lines of life was entreating and interesting to read. the color scheme and picture elevated the theme. I thought it was a really good entry for the abstract art contest.
Good Luck.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
Your poem the Lines of life was entreating and interesting to read. the color scheme and picture elevated the theme. I thought it was a really good entry for the abstract art contest.
Good Luck.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings....
Comment from Minglement
What a lovely, faith filled poem. I enjoyed the rhyme and meter. I made for a very smooth, melodic read. I loved this line :'a seed, an heir of Abraham'. Well ell done.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
What a lovely, faith filled poem. I enjoyed the rhyme and meter. I made for a very smooth, melodic read. I loved this line :'a seed, an heir of Abraham'. Well ell done.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments...Blessings
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You are very welcome. Good luck.
Comment from Supe
Very nice piece, flowing smoothly from start to finish. The title is perfect as mentioned throughout. The vibrant colours add to this abstract art poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
Very nice piece, flowing smoothly from start to finish. The title is perfect as mentioned throughout. The vibrant colours add to this abstract art poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and best wishes....
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you are welcome.
Comment from Janilou
A moving poem speaking of the powerful truth of creation and a loving God who loves us and desires nothing more than to spend an eternity with us, His children. I like the artwork you chose to define this poem. It works well.
Well done. No errors noted.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
A moving poem speaking of the powerful truth of creation and a loving God who loves us and desires nothing more than to spend an eternity with us, His children. I like the artwork you chose to define this poem. It works well.
Well done. No errors noted.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.....
Comment from innmint
I liked the artwork you chose to go along with your poem. It looks like Heaven shining through the darkness. I loved the colors you chose as well. Beautiful work! Thank you.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
I liked the artwork you chose to go along with your poem. It looks like Heaven shining through the darkness. I loved the colors you chose as well. Beautiful work! Thank you.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and kind comments.
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful and inspirational poem that matches the outstanding Abstract art work you chose. Excellent repeating lines to draw the reader into the piece.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
A beautiful and inspirational poem that matches the outstanding Abstract art work you chose. Excellent repeating lines to draw the reader into the piece.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments.