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Viewing comments for Chapter 84 "Sparks Flew"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Aiona,
I like this new version of this old rhyme. It shows how surprising and warm love can be. Perfect entry into the contest
Good luck an keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
    Thanks, Joan! :)
reply by dragonpoet on 24-Feb-2020
    You're welcome, Aiona.
    Joan
Comment from susand3022
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Hi Aiona, I started singing that song... who did it... Bobby Darren maybe? Hang on... Googling... Nope! I got the wrong Bobby... It was Bobby Vinton! Geez... I haven't heard that name in a long time! I expect you've never heard it at all! LOL Okat, Google the song. Bobby Vinton, Roses are Red My Love... LOL

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Heh! My dad used to sing that song all the time. He doesn't sing much anymore. Not sure why. This is my song of the day. Thanks, Susan!
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Aiona, This is a lovely Valentine's Day poem. The presentation is great and the idea of it charming. It's original and poignant all at the same time. Good luck in your contest. xoox Kiwi

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Kiwi.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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A very cute and romantic offering for the Valentine poem entry with rhymes.

Your selected artwork provides for a nice overall presentation.

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Mark.