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Buckminsterfullerene

The football* that changed Chemistry...

29 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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What a marvellous response in this 20 letter dictionary poem Sally, a marvellous answer to this contest, and you've made a perfect shape as a bonus for this contest, your knowledge of science is definitely useful to your writing, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    LOL! ;) Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Roy -- it's one of those that you know going in won't win cuz it's too nerdy to have wide-spread appeal, but I simply could not resist when the I ran across the word in the 20-letter listing!! ;) :) The ?nerd? was strong with this one.... LOL! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
reply by royowen on 22-Jan-2020
    Good job
Comment from Gail Denham
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This poem, and the looonnnnngggg word took some diggin in history I think. Good job. never heard of this - but then I don't follow science much. Good job with this.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    LOL!! ;) :) Thanx for your perseverance and your review, Gail -- it's one of those that you know going in won't win cuz it's too nerdy to have wide-spread appeal, but I simply could not resist when the I ran across the word in the 20-letter listing!! ;) :) The ?nerd? was strong with this one.... LOL! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from juliaSjames
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This is excellent, Yvette. I abandoned your author notes halfway, I'm afraid. :-)) But I read enough to be aware of the facts.
Actually I think this entry is a contest winner. You selected a difficult word and aced the poem.

Kudos for courage, intelligence and creativity.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    LOL!! ;) :) Thanx for the review, Julia, and I promise not to take the abandonment too seriously... :) :) :) This was one of those that you know going in won't win cuz it's too nerdy to have wide-spread appeal, but I simply could not resist when the I ran across the word in the 20-letter listing!! ;) :) The ?nerd? was strong with this one.... LOL! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
reply by juliaSjames on 22-Jan-2020
    Ah, but it's a nerd friendly contest.
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you for this educational teacup poem. Chemistry is so fascinating and its nice to watch you teach it so eloquently, and in a poem no less. I'm amazed at how smart you are. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    Glad you enjoyed this one, Lady Sal -- it's one of those that you know going in won't win cuz it's too nerdy to have wide-spread appeal, but I simply could not resist when the I ran across the word in the 20-letter listing!! ;) :) The ?nerd? was strong with this one.... LOL! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
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I liked your description of the buckyball here and how you connected it to football. One small thing I would suggest would be to changing the font size a bit and to not start every word with a capital letter. That would help with the overall teacup presentation style!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your review. ;) :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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The Six Stars are for a stellar teacher with much knowledge and a flair for
composition. This a very unique presentation with great information. The picture is astounding in its own unique technological portrayal.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thank you, THANK YOU, Rafy for these awesome stars!! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one -- it's one of those that I honestly thought wouldn't win cuz it's too nerdy to have wide-spread appeal, but I still couldn't resist when the I ran across the word in the 20-letter listing!! ;) :) The ?nerd? was strong with this one.... LOL! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from MamaBebop
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Yvette,
I saw this word in the list and was instantly drawn to it! I read about it and I thought I am not sure how to make this poetic. You, the genius you are, did it!! So proud of you.
Good luck in the contest.
Respectfully and kindly yours,
Beth-the minx.
(I'm owning this name for 24 hours ;))

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    Hooray for owning the name -- it fits you: wear it well! Keep the neighbors wondering... it's worth every moment!! ;) :) LOL!
    And I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Beth -- it's one of those that you know going in won't win cuz it's too nerdy to have wide-spread appeal, but I simply could not resist when the I ran across the word in the 20-letter listing!! ;) :) The ?nerd? was strong with this one.... LOL! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from Darlene Franklin
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I saw that word in the list and wondered what on earth it might be. I'm so glad you used it and explained it in the notes! Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    LOL! Think most on the list are like that, yeah?! ;):) Thanx for the review, Darlene -- much appreciated! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a fascinating back story for your poem here Yvette and it is very interesting too. A fine teacup poem for the contest, very inventive, much enjoyed,l ove Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    LOL!! ;) Thanx for the review, Dolly -- it's one of those that you know going in won't win cuz it's too nerdy to have wide-spread appeal, but I simply could not resist when the I ran across the word in the 20-letter listing!! ;) :) The ?nerd? was strong with this one.... LOL! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Yvette,

My brain is bursting with all these mathematical concepts you are tossing out LOL

But one can still learn. Fisher Price has a children's toy similar to your artwork, which my grandson plays with.

Methinks if you want to extend your alliteration in your last line, do consider:
Famous Forties (or Fifties) Football ... haha.

Mark


 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    Perhaps. But, as explained in the notes, the poem would no longer be accurate as it was discovered in the eighties. ;) Thank you for your review. ;)