~Someday~
Together Forever!57 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"-Someday-"
Is a RHYMING VALENTINE'S DAY LOVE POEM CONTEST ENTRY.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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"-Someday-"
Is a RHYMING VALENTINE'S DAY LOVE POEM CONTEST ENTRY.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE!"
Thanks, Ricky for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome week and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a beautiful valentine and tribute to your wife. I am so sorry you lost her. You obviously have very strong faith, and that will see you through. Excellent writing, heartfelt and warm.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This is a beautiful valentine and tribute to your wife. I am so sorry you lost her. You obviously have very strong faith, and that will see you through. Excellent writing, heartfelt and warm.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Therese!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I are co-authoring the book "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is listed under "Featured Stories" at the top. We would be honored having you follow along. Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully,
Bill
Comment from nomi338
I am deeply moved by your beautiful, heartfelt words of tribute to you dear late wife. I have a slightly different view of the future regard the reuniting of spouses in that the account of Job a faithful friend of of Jehovah God. At Job, chapter 14, verse 13 Job states: "â?¯O that in the Grave you would conceal me," in verse 14, he asks the question: If a man dies, can he live again? At verse 15, he further states: You will call, and I will answer you. You will long for the work of your hands. Without question or doubt, God will resurrect many who have fallen asleep in death. However, only a limited number will be resurrected to heaven, while the vast majority will be resurrected here on earth to live in a world that will resemble the Garden of Eden. The resident os which will be perfect in both mind and body.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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I am deeply moved by your beautiful, heartfelt words of tribute to you dear late wife. I have a slightly different view of the future regard the reuniting of spouses in that the account of Job a faithful friend of of Jehovah God. At Job, chapter 14, verse 13 Job states: "â?¯O that in the Grave you would conceal me," in verse 14, he asks the question: If a man dies, can he live again? At verse 15, he further states: You will call, and I will answer you. You will long for the work of your hands. Without question or doubt, God will resurrect many who have fallen asleep in death. However, only a limited number will be resurrected to heaven, while the vast majority will be resurrected here on earth to live in a world that will resemble the Garden of Eden. The resident os which will be perfect in both mind and body.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Nomi!
Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Great hearing from you, my dear friend. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully,
Bill
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Please know that I was not trying to preach or attack your beliefs. It is what AI believe myself. I applaud your wonderful salute to your wife. I do not know what I would do should I lose my mate of 40 plus years.
Comment from Minglement
Wow - it's hard to comment on this beautiful poem reflecting your love for your wife. I remember reading another romantic poem about your wife but did not realize you had lost her. This was such a touching read. Having experienced the loss of a beloved spouse, my heart goes out to you. I feel the pain and longing so poignantly expressed. God bless you.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Wow - it's hard to comment on this beautiful poem reflecting your love for your wife. I remember reading another romantic poem about your wife but did not realize you had lost her. This was such a touching read. Having experienced the loss of a beloved spouse, my heart goes out to you. I feel the pain and longing so poignantly expressed. God bless you.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," my friend!
I send my condolence to you as well. It is great hearing from you. Thanks for the "Exceptional" review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. FYI, Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I, Bill Bishop, (aka Commando) are co-authoring the book "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is listed under "Featured Stories" at the top. Having you follow along will be an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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You are most welcome. Sometime when you have more time, tell me more about your co-authored book. I'll try to find the listing in Featured stories. If you have time 'Id appreciate your feedback on a chapter in my book, 'Soul Secrets'. Take care.
Comment from Alchera
No words could be enough to describe the dolorous thinking state of mind at its inspiration and how beautifully it should have been women up for such an Angel beloved lost. None could ever use better words than yours for such memory and loving day. A Great poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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No words could be enough to describe the dolorous thinking state of mind at its inspiration and how beautifully it should have been women up for such an Angel beloved lost. None could ever use better words than yours for such memory and loving day. A Great poem.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Alchera!
Thanks for the review,kind words and taking the time to read my work. Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I are co-authoring the book "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is listed under "Featured Stories" at the top. We would be honored having you follow along. Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully,
Bill
Comment from Supe
Very moving and 'yes' tears did come to my eyes. This read smoothly from start to finish with a great tribute to your beautiful wife. I am sorry for your loss. You have captured your 'Angel of God' and shared her with us. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Very moving and 'yes' tears did come to my eyes. This read smoothly from start to finish with a great tribute to your beautiful wife. I am sorry for your loss. You have captured your 'Angel of God' and shared her with us. Nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Supe!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I are co-authoring the book "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is listed under "Featured Stories" at the top. We would be honored having you follow along. Best Wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully,
Bill
Comment from innmint
What a beautiful poem! I loved the line, "Throughout eternity, we'll beat as one heart." Your wife is an Angel of God no doubt! Very moving. Thank you very much for sharing!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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What a beautiful poem! I loved the line, "Throughout eternity, we'll beat as one heart." Your wife is an Angel of God no doubt! Very moving. Thank you very much for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Innmint! Thanks for the "Exceptional" review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I are co-authoring the book "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is listed under "Featured Stories" at the top. We would be honored having you follow along. Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully,
Bill
Comment from 24chas
This was a very nice poem for the contest. I think you really captured the feelings toward your wife and the promise of eternity together. Nicely done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This was a very nice poem for the contest. I think you really captured the feelings toward your wife and the promise of eternity together. Nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," my dear friend!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. Cathy Waldron, (aka Tootie) and I are co-authoring the book "Love Long Distance." Chapter 19 is listed under "Featured Stories" at the top. We would be honored having you follow along. Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully,
Bill
Comment from judester
A poignant yet whimsical tribute to your cherished wife. Faith helps to console and look forward. I was touched by the line, hold you warm and safe in my strong arms, a heartbreaking lament.
Wishing you peace, judester
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A poignant yet whimsical tribute to your cherished wife. Faith helps to console and look forward. I was touched by the line, hold you warm and safe in my strong arms, a heartbreaking lament.
Wishing you peace, judester
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Judester!
Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully,
Bill
Comment from rjuselius
This is heartbreakingly beautiful and sad dear Bill although at the same moment is full of hope. I wish you all the strentgh in the World!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a super-dooper squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This is heartbreakingly beautiful and sad dear Bill although at the same moment is full of hope. I wish you all the strentgh in the World!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a super-dooper squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Rebekka!
A "Super-dooper squeeze" right back at ya. Thanks for the "Exceptional" review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully,
Bill
