You Keep Me Warm
Firewood is heavy.30 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Aw.......that is so sweet. True love, the kind that lasts. I like your poem. Your husband keeps you warm in more ways than one.
Good luck with the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
Aw.......that is so sweet. True love, the kind that lasts. I like your poem. Your husband keeps you warm in more ways than one.
Good luck with the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thanks Gypsy!
Comment from Ricky1024
"You keep me Warm'
I'd a 20 Word Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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"You keep me Warm'
I'd a 20 Word Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 25-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Thanks Ricky I am on holiday in Mexico so slit the. Slow
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Okay?
Ricky
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Sorry slow connection
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No problem I!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Laura, how lovely is that. I can just picture your husband all covered in snow and an armload full of firewood. I loved your poem and good luck in the contest. Ulla x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Hi Laura, how lovely is that. I can just picture your husband all covered in snow and an armload full of firewood. I loved your poem and good luck in the contest. Ulla x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you Ulla I appreciate your. Review I am in Mexico at the moment
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty word poem about a blustery winter night. Covered in snow he carries in the heavy firewood to bring in warmth and comfort with a lasting love.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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A very well-written twenty word poem about a blustery winter night. Covered in snow he carries in the heavy firewood to bring in warmth and comfort with a lasting love.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you Sandra,, i appreciate your review i am in mexico now
Comment from Alyssa Weisbrod
The simplicity of this is astounding, in absolutely the best possible way. This feeling of warmth written about is a sought after feeling that is hard to put into words and yet you have managed to do just that.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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The simplicity of this is astounding, in absolutely the best possible way. This feeling of warmth written about is a sought after feeling that is hard to put into words and yet you have managed to do just that.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Alyssa, your review and thoughtful comments are appreciated
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I like the cozy feel, the warm, appealing tone of this fine poem. You have made excellent use of all of your syllables to paint a lovely, romantic winter scene.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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I like the cozy feel, the warm, appealing tone of this fine poem. You have made excellent use of all of your syllables to paint a lovely, romantic winter scene.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your thoughts and reviewing, I appreciate it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, those men.... can't live without 'em although sometimes we might wanna lone 'em out for a bit...LOL! ;) But, all-in-all, they're keepers! ;) This is a wonderful offering, Laura, as it delivers the message of both love and devotion along with a scenario of cold out but warm hearts in...! ;) Love the balance and symmetry you've managed with your syllable usage/allotment! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Oh, those men.... can't live without 'em although sometimes we might wanna lone 'em out for a bit...LOL! ;) But, all-in-all, they're keepers! ;) This is a wonderful offering, Laura, as it delivers the message of both love and devotion along with a scenario of cold out but warm hearts in...! ;) Love the balance and symmetry you've managed with your syllable usage/allotment! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and good luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much, Yvette Have a great night, I hope to review more stuff in Mexico.
Comment from nancyjam
What a beautiful poem! such love expressed in just 20 words. You present a sweet picture of a husband carrying firewood to bring warmth to
A loved one.
Good luck in the contest!
Nancy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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What a beautiful poem! such love expressed in just 20 words. You present a sweet picture of a husband carrying firewood to bring warmth to
A loved one.
Good luck in the contest!
Nancy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
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Thanks Nancy, for the stars and review.
Comment from lyenochka
Aww! That is so sweet. It shows faithful love and dedication. Great job with your 20 word poem that gives tribute to your husband's acts of love. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Aww! That is so sweet. It shows faithful love and dedication. Great job with your 20 word poem that gives tribute to your husband's acts of love. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review ^_^
Comment from kahpot
A product of a great love as he brings comfort and warmth to you and your surroundings, an excellent read and poem in this short form, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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A product of a great love as he brings comfort and warmth to you and your surroundings, an excellent read and poem in this short form, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thank you! Your comments and reviews are important to me.
