Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Creative with vivid descriptive words to assist in viewing glorious visuals. Well thought out and nicely written. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013

Comment from twinklepoems

Excellent

Understanding the xeno bleno of the bic bland helps me get to the point where I gerailbrord the star of the bukeye. But he who encounters God will know all of the gabash ball soon enough.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013

Comment from ravenblack

Average

You take a lot of risks here and I was with you for awhile. You want readers to feel the poem yet confuse the poem w/convoluted and made up words where it gets to the point that the reader can feel nothing but confused. I too like to be inventive, but you have to have balance, throw in some hooks for the reader to latch on to. When author notes are almost as long as the poem and when you require a glossary, well, you really should just strive for more clarity. I really feel you sweat over this one. But in addition to writing for yourself, you must acknowledge the reader.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013

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Comment from vapros

Average

Three stars only for this concoction of disjointed terms and verbs. I always assume that a writer has a message of some kind in his mind, but today I am unable to see one here.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013

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Comment from seewhatimwritingnow

Average

Sorry Al, but this 'All Time Best' and 'Recognized' writing just makes NO sense at all to me. WHY are you determined to write in such a way that people receive no message? I would expect more from one with your intelligence and all those degrees. Thanks for allowing us to read this. Betty

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013

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YOU'RE WELCOME!

Comment from prayingpoet

Good

I wish I could feel and enjoy. I wish I could understand, but I don't. Parts almost make sense, the rest I don't get. I hate sounding mean, but it seems I am every time I read the things you have written. Cheers, I wish the very best for you.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013

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Comment from cvcopac

Good

I read through the reviews and therein lie some good advice, Al. You are writing to yourself. Too many strings, smoke and mirrors. Kenny

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Comment from Peter Mansson

Excellent

This could actually be quite brilliant with some serious, serious editing. You appear to be your own worst enemy with the use of nonsense words, and a litany of explanations to try and force clarity from your cryptic messages. However, there are some excellent phrases to be admired;- "I behold seven of the million colors that spark miraculous light", "I embrace love pearls" and "glistening my heart to sense the truth". But, I abhor phrases like "THY cardinal rule AIN'T able to show THY grace".

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013

Comment from Alexander E Poet

Excellent

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Comment from donaldww

Excellent

Dear Alcreator Dear,

You've litt a web of ceaseless unglowing, highlighted by touches of sanguine whitish xanthic azure. You dip into dazzling oceans, xen-reddish clouds, and have even sighted the mythical chunk disappear.

But these miraculous lights are your singular call, they glisten only in your heart, and are seen by no one but you.

laying a fart--
there's no humour in it
when you live alone

Thanks for sharing your wealth, and crazy fiction!

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013