Oh Life!
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Comment from writer723
Wonderfully written poem. I love your vivid descriptions and colorful depictions. You have a way with words and the gift of expression. I found the language reminiscent of the King James Version of the Holy Bible, which I've always found poetic and beautiful. You write very well in this style.
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Wonderfully written poem. I love your vivid descriptions and colorful depictions. You have a way with words and the gift of expression. I found the language reminiscent of the King James Version of the Holy Bible, which I've always found poetic and beautiful. You write very well in this style.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I found it hard to decipher your words here except to say that there is a rich and vibrant world created by God for us all to enjoy if only we open our eyes to it. Love Dolly x
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I found it hard to decipher your words here except to say that there is a rich and vibrant world created by God for us all to enjoy if only we open our eyes to it. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from kahpot
I enjoyed what I took from these words, but wonder why you must shorten some of the most important ones in the middle of something meaningful, none the less very enjoyable****kahpot
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I enjoyed what I took from these words, but wonder why you must shorten some of the most important ones in the middle of something meaningful, none the less very enjoyable****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from October21
I see you are wise on religion and this is a very interesting write, perhaps something that could be comments only. I'm not sure. Well done on your brilliant poem.
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I see you are wise on religion and this is a very interesting write, perhaps something that could be comments only. I'm not sure. Well done on your brilliant poem.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
Comment from mizzkris20
Your poem had me wanting to know what would happen next. I couldn't read fast enough, lol. I really liked this one. Keep up the great work. Good luck with future writes
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Your poem had me wanting to know what would happen next. I couldn't read fast enough, lol. I really liked this one. Keep up the great work. Good luck with future writes
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
Comment from Alan K Pease
You have a gift for words amplified by the notes you express on them. You take the challenge to develop an idea into prose. I believe your God is your savior and care. At times the poetry is a little hard to follow.. I read it several times and think I followed its gist.
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You have a gift for words amplified by the notes you express on them. You take the challenge to develop an idea into prose. I believe your God is your savior and care. At times the poetry is a little hard to follow.. I read it several times and think I followed its gist.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
Comment from EmanLNorman
Wow so cool, I never knew what was going to be next, this is awesome and you are awesome. I've never read anything like this. Its so cool. thank you so much for posting it.
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Wow so cool, I never knew what was going to be next, this is awesome and you are awesome. I've never read anything like this. Its so cool. thank you so much for posting it.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
Comment from honeytree
The art work is really great and suitable for these words.
We are human beings we can love and also hate others
For their hurtful ways towards us and others.
I felt the whole poem was written very well.
Honey tree
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The art work is really great and suitable for these words.
We are human beings we can love and also hate others
For their hurtful ways towards us and others.
I felt the whole poem was written very well.
Honey tree
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
Comment from 9999pool
The poem is written with a clear message of God and classified as spiritual in nature.
This review needs no further comments as the author's note had been very helpful coupled with the easy to read lines. The essence of God is in all of us.
We have to open our arms and accept His Word.
Everything will fall into place with belief and faith.
This is one of the best among your poems as the lines are easier to read and the words used are simplified somewhat.
Great work!
Cheerio, Ritchie.
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The poem is written with a clear message of God and classified as spiritual in nature.
This review needs no further comments as the author's note had been very helpful coupled with the easy to read lines. The essence of God is in all of us.
We have to open our arms and accept His Word.
Everything will fall into place with belief and faith.
This is one of the best among your poems as the lines are easier to read and the words used are simplified somewhat.
Great work!
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2013
Comment from Flamingbush
Your poems are so very interesting. I especially like the colors in this one: xeno-cloud in the xen-shadow, chicanery to adumbrate, golden whitish embroidered azure
web of the ceaseless glow; seven of the million colors that spark miraculous lights; oceans of dazzling ray, pearls, penumbra, xen-reddish clouds
Through it all you show an amazing awe of God, who created all these amazing colors. The way you weave these words together is truly remarkable.
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Your poems are so very interesting. I especially like the colors in this one: xeno-cloud in the xen-shadow, chicanery to adumbrate, golden whitish embroidered azure
web of the ceaseless glow; seven of the million colors that spark miraculous lights; oceans of dazzling ray, pearls, penumbra, xen-reddish clouds
Through it all you show an amazing awe of God, who created all these amazing colors. The way you weave these words together is truly remarkable.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2013
