Oh Life!
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Startling imagery--I cannot profess to undertand this--I confess that I looked at reviews for clues but I still don't get this. I have trouble comprehending metaphor.
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Startling imagery--I cannot profess to undertand this--I confess that I looked at reviews for clues but I still don't get this. I have trouble comprehending metaphor.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Eunice Amero
Well done! I like the feel of the poem and God centered. I love reading stories ad poems about God. He's wonderful. He deserve all the praise we can give. Keep up the good work.
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Well done! I like the feel of the poem and God centered. I love reading stories ad poems about God. He's wonderful. He deserve all the praise we can give. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
You have a unique way of expressing yourself. I guess we all have our own way of. Doing that, and it becomes like our own personal handprint, or indeed footprint in the sand of expression. Beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
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You have a unique way of expressing yourself. I guess we all have our own way of. Doing that, and it becomes like our own personal handprint, or indeed footprint in the sand of expression. Beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this poem, but I couldn't read it as a complete sentence. It would be on heck of a run on sentence. LOL That's just me. I'm far from a poet. I can only write prose, and some days I wonder about it. LOL Thank you for sharing.
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I enjoyed reading this poem, but I couldn't read it as a complete sentence. It would be on heck of a run on sentence. LOL That's just me. I'm far from a poet. I can only write prose, and some days I wonder about it. LOL Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from karenina
A unique way of expressing belief... Unusual free verse scanning down the page. Nothing like a shot of the unusual to stand up and get noticed for your thoughts! Your author's notes helped me out a lot. Thanks for sharing. Karenina
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A unique way of expressing belief... Unusual free verse scanning down the page. Nothing like a shot of the unusual to stand up and get noticed for your thoughts! Your author's notes helped me out a lot. Thanks for sharing. Karenina
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Prized!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice spiritual poem about your beliefs. Interesting wording... unusual but understandable. Good author notes. Good job.
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Prized!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice spiritual poem about your beliefs. Interesting wording... unusual but understandable. Good author notes. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from estory
This is in an imaginative, unique and original format, and I liked the daring you showed in exploring this run on sentence structure. I think you had some good flow in it, and I liked how you contrasted the short and long parts. You built up a great rhythm through that, a sense of the fractured nature of structure. I also liked the colorful, myriad, kaladascope images. All the rainbows of colors, the single colors plucked out of the rainbows. It really created this great sense of the glory of God. It really has a feeling of moving behind the real world into the surreal world, out of the physical correct world into the spiritual world. estory
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This is in an imaginative, unique and original format, and I liked the daring you showed in exploring this run on sentence structure. I think you had some good flow in it, and I liked how you contrasted the short and long parts. You built up a great rhythm through that, a sense of the fractured nature of structure. I also liked the colorful, myriad, kaladascope images. All the rainbows of colors, the single colors plucked out of the rainbows. It really created this great sense of the glory of God. It really has a feeling of moving behind the real world into the surreal world, out of the physical correct world into the spiritual world. estory
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from elchupakabra
If you're sticking with the same subject matter time after time, this is the way to do it. I thought the structure of this piece was inventive and fun. Good work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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If you're sticking with the same subject matter time after time, this is the way to do it. I thought the structure of this piece was inventive and fun. Good work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Wow! You are a master of wordcraft I think. I read and read to understand the deeper meanings. Bravo! A one-of-a-kind- poem. I firmly believe there is no end to God's love for his children. The least we can do is to love him in return and lead a righteous life for the betterment of humanity.
Thanks for sharing!
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Wow! You are a master of wordcraft I think. I read and read to understand the deeper meanings. Bravo! A one-of-a-kind- poem. I firmly believe there is no end to God's love for his children. The least we can do is to love him in return and lead a righteous life for the betterment of humanity.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from Sandra C. Johnston
I had to read this a few times and then I was able to enjoy your artistry with word. I believe that it appeals more to the 'intelligentsia'. It is quite'Chaucerian'. You do appeal to the higher mind and that can be good!
There is a tapestry here to be prized.
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I had to read this a few times and then I was able to enjoy your artistry with word. I believe that it appeals more to the 'intelligentsia'. It is quite'Chaucerian'. You do appeal to the higher mind and that can be good!
There is a tapestry here to be prized.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
