Oh Life!
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Prized!"Experiences of living
136 total reviews
Comment from Badger_29
The amount of work and research that went into this is slippery yet leaves the reader walking away with a sense of fulfillment! Fully unrestrained joy and peace. Keep writing, ever abiding in the spirit
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The amount of work and research that went into this is slippery yet leaves the reader walking away with a sense of fulfillment! Fully unrestrained joy and peace. Keep writing, ever abiding in the spirit
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
Comment from Begin Again
Sorry... I have tried to follow your offerings but I feel you speak far beyond my capabilities of understanding. I hope others draw something from it, but I simply can't follow what you wish to relay to me. Smiles, Carol
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Sorry... I have tried to follow your offerings but I feel you speak far beyond my capabilities of understanding. I hope others draw something from it, but I simply can't follow what you wish to relay to me. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from TPAC
A good fight within self prevailing one's beliefs in a God, tossing feelings about such a probable Being existing, defining ones own identity before Him. The read captured my interests.
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A good fight within self prevailing one's beliefs in a God, tossing feelings about such a probable Being existing, defining ones own identity before Him. The read captured my interests.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
how quietly
Thou help me prized
the pride name in Thy grandeur
and I recall
my reporting dawn
leaving this mort' abode,
Love it, Pete
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Hi ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
how quietly
Thou help me prized
the pride name in Thy grandeur
and I recall
my reporting dawn
leaving this mort' abode,
Love it, Pete
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from DeboraDyess
This is a beautiful praise/prayer to the Creator, Alcreator. I love the imagery and flow of language. YOu paint beauty with your words. I love that you see seven of millions of colors. isn't it like God to create above and beyond what we can take in!
Well done, sir!
Blessings,
Deb
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This is a beautiful praise/prayer to the Creator, Alcreator. I love the imagery and flow of language. YOu paint beauty with your words. I love that you see seven of millions of colors. isn't it like God to create above and beyond what we can take in!
Well done, sir!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Susan Larson
Since you've already received nearly 700 reviews, by now you've probably heard it all and are getting tired of reading. Your poetry is a bit obscure to me and I grew up on Kenneth Koch and Kenneth Patchen.
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Since you've already received nearly 700 reviews, by now you've probably heard it all and are getting tired of reading. Your poetry is a bit obscure to me and I grew up on Kenneth Koch and Kenneth Patchen.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I will have to admit that I struggled to understand this poem, until I read your notes. Then it became somewhat clearer. You certainly have your own poetic style. All best. Ulla:)))
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Hi there, I will have to admit that I struggled to understand this poem, until I read your notes. Then it became somewhat clearer. You certainly have your own poetic style. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from jake cosmos aller
this is a powerful mediation on God and whether we mere morals can ever comprehend or understand the divine essence of the universe. I like the tone and the rhythm of the poem as well.
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this is a powerful mediation on God and whether we mere morals can ever comprehend or understand the divine essence of the universe. I like the tone and the rhythm of the poem as well.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Lana Marie
I had to read it a couple times as I was challenged in trying to read it in one full sentence. I'm thankful for your author notes that helped me comprehend your piece of written artistry better than I would have without it.
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I had to read it a couple times as I was challenged in trying to read it in one full sentence. I'm thankful for your author notes that helped me comprehend your piece of written artistry better than I would have without it.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Senyai
Hi, ALCREATOR,
Your cryptic verse holds many mysteries for me. I am able to glean that somehow you are praising someone ( perhaps God?) and speaking of adhering to the righteous life.
Only those that are graced by God, can comprehend the words expressed.
Have a great weekend!
Senyai
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Hi, ALCREATOR,
Your cryptic verse holds many mysteries for me. I am able to glean that somehow you are praising someone ( perhaps God?) and speaking of adhering to the righteous life.
Only those that are graced by God, can comprehend the words expressed.
Have a great weekend!
Senyai
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
