Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I liked your descriptive here of the king of the jungle and his role within his environment, protecting and masterful, much enjoyed . . . .love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thanks Dolly.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Good

Your offering for this Sedoka contest has the correct syllable count and has a very proud focus! :) I would suggest, perhaps, removing the periods as none of those statements are actually sentences... :) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020

Thanks for your review. I agree with the removal of periods. I was typing in the poem right at the deadline and couldn?t make edits.

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

I believe that you have followed the requirements necessary for a sedoka.

Your picture went perfect with your poem.

Best of luck in the sedoka poem contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020

Thanks for your review.