Dogs' Day Out
A Sedoka entry.8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this made me smile and it sounds like these dogs need a good bath! Socialising on the beach telling their stories, you brought the essence of doggy days here, much enjoyed, with the reality in the car going home with the horrible smell! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, this made me smile and it sounds like these dogs need a good bath! Socialising on the beach telling their stories, you brought the essence of doggy days here, much enjoyed, with the reality in the car going home with the horrible smell! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
Comment from Minglement
This is a fun entry for the contest, poking fun at the well-known aftermath of taking dogs to play at the beach, or a creek. There's nothing like the smell of wet dog. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a fun entry for the contest, poking fun at the well-known aftermath of taking dogs to play at the beach, or a creek. There's nothing like the smell of wet dog. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
Comment from emmaysavage
I love this great beginning. grinning faces all around. The last stanza provides a very satisfactory end. That wet dog smell is a very effective olfactory image
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I love this great beginning. grinning faces all around. The last stanza provides a very satisfactory end. That wet dog smell is a very effective olfactory image
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah, I was about to say 'perfumed' might not be the best word here... :) LOL! A fun offering for the contest...especially for the dog lovers out there! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Yeah, I was about to say 'perfumed' might not be the best word here... :) LOL! A fun offering for the contest...especially for the dog lovers out there! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from shaffer40
This is so graphic I can smell the dogs in the car. The word usage is great--"perfumed mem'ries." I love the line about their tales telling their stories. (The St. Bernard is gorgeous.)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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This is so graphic I can smell the dogs in the car. The word usage is great--"perfumed mem'ries." I love the line about their tales telling their stories. (The St. Bernard is gorgeous.)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Yes, it's best to leave the windows open wide.
Thanks so much for your terrific review!
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Yes, can you tell I like dogs? You're quite welcome.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Sedoka writing prompt.
This short verse tells of dogs having fun on the beach, but putting up with the wet dog smell on the way home.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Sedoka writing prompt.
This short verse tells of dogs having fun on the beach, but putting up with the wet dog smell on the way home.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your comments Sharon.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a great picture to illustrate your poem. It does seem like a
beginning of a planned meeting. I like the use of smell to remember
your day.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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This is a great picture to illustrate your poem. It does seem like a
beginning of a planned meeting. I like the use of smell to remember
your day.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
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Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem paints a picture of a beachy day out with the dogs. it is an excellent contest entry. The images are effectively painted with words. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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This poem paints a picture of a beachy day out with the dogs. it is an excellent contest entry. The images are effectively painted with words. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanks for your comments, Susan.
