View to a Kill
Black and white agent of death from the sky...18 total reviews
Comment from Bar62
Well, you are chalking them up lately. Congrats some splendid words. Your delivery is so to the point, with just the right economy of words. Well done! ¥ou also have a fine touch with your reviews, and I thank you for that.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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Well, you are chalking them up lately. Congrats some splendid words. Your delivery is so to the point, with just the right economy of words. Well done! ¥ou also have a fine touch with your reviews, and I thank you for that.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
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LOL! It's almost always a reflection of the mood of the voters, my friend -- the short formats are just perfect for a busy teacher...there's always a few minutes to step aside and do a poem and not even have to look up rhymes....and, of course, the 'flavor' of the poems change, too, with my mood at the end of the teaching day - LOL! ;) Thanx for stopping by and have a great rest of the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ogden
A very likely splash, with an impressive illustration, but between you and me, do you really believe a salmon can express the misery of its impending doom by keening?
(Two out of three isn't bad.)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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A very likely splash, with an impressive illustration, but between you and me, do you really believe a salmon can express the misery of its impending doom by keening?
(Two out of three isn't bad.)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Yeah, I don't know about the salmon... it could have been the eagle 'screaming' in triumph! lol! Thanks for the review, Don!
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Yeah, but the words of the poem
Aw, who'll know? - how bout we forget it?
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;-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written lune about the mighty eagle who planned this lethal splash to find that salmon swimming in the lake unexpectingly until the eagle striked.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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A very well-written lune about the mighty eagle who planned this lethal splash to find that salmon swimming in the lake unexpectingly until the eagle striked.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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My thanks for your review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a fabulous presentation, and the lune? Marvelous! Yes, I can almost 'hear' the salmon - even though a fish wouldn't make a loud enough noise, the line tells of the suffering.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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What a fabulous presentation, and the lune? Marvelous! Yes, I can almost 'hear' the salmon - even though a fish wouldn't make a loud enough noise, the line tells of the suffering.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thank your for your review!
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
They are stealth predators. You can look at their eyes and see intelligence in them and the ability to see at great distances. I like the message of this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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They are stealth predators. You can look at their eyes and see intelligence in them and the ability to see at great distances. I like the message of this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your review, Jeffrey!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a terrific Lune, my friend. A well chosen title giving these few syllables a new perspective. Nicely done and good luck! -Kerry.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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This is a terrific Lune, my friend. A well chosen title giving these few syllables a new perspective. Nicely done and good luck! -Kerry.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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My thanks for your review!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Minglement
I've never heard a salmon make a keening cry but I can almost hear it in this beautiful, flowing entry for the Lune contest. This is the most lyrical entry I have read. Loved it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I've never heard a salmon make a keening cry but I can almost hear it in this beautiful, flowing entry for the Lune contest. This is the most lyrical entry I have read. Loved it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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My thanks for your wonderful review! I am so very glad you heard the tune as well!
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You are most welcome. I did indeed :)
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Wow! Simply wow! You managed to capture this moment and describe it brilliantly well in my opinion! The hawk needs to do whatever it takes to survive and feed. But the process of diving in and catching a fish right from the surface of water and then just flying away is a sight ti behold. Good luck for the contest! Cheers
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Wow! Simply wow! You managed to capture this moment and describe it brilliantly well in my opinion! The hawk needs to do whatever it takes to survive and feed. But the process of diving in and catching a fish right from the surface of water and then just flying away is a sight ti behold. Good luck for the contest! Cheers
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Many thanks for your review this evening. :-)
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Your line and the art are very complimentary. Great job and best of luck to you in the contest.
Nature is so much fun to watch and to marvel at and you did well to describe it in a few short words.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Your line and the art are very complimentary. Great job and best of luck to you in the contest.
Nature is so much fun to watch and to marvel at and you did well to describe it in a few short words.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Many thanks for your review this evening. :-)
Comment from RShipp
I believe you have followed all of the requirements for a 5-3-5 lune.
Your picture was a great choice for this poem.
Best of luck in the lune contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I believe you have followed all of the requirements for a 5-3-5 lune.
Your picture was a great choice for this poem.
Best of luck in the lune contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I appreciate your review.
