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Undulate

Like the motion of the ocean...

7 total reviews 
Comment from Sally Law
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I am shocked to see my photo somehow leaked to the internet. Her abs makes me want to take up belly dancing. I would, if only I would just get off the couch and quit writing. Oh... then where would we be? Love this fun and fresh offering.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxoxo

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
    Blahaha! I know what you mean though, if I work out and go to work, I wouldn?t have time to write an go to work! I think I?d probably better stick to writing myself! I had entered this in Obscure Word contest, but committee said it was obscure and did I want to rewrite (at 5 am this morning), ummm... well, this took me some time, so I asked to be removed so I wouldn?t hold up others from contest! Darn.... lol! Thank you for this humorous feedback! xoxo
Comment from Susan X Smith
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I am quite familiar with the word you chose, but the moving picture is outstanding. It highlights the piece very well. Your words are well chosen. Good luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Thank you! I don?t see it used too much so I thought it would be good choice to show it used in relationship to dance! Appreciate your kind words! xoxo
Comment from RodG
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Undulate has long been one of my favorite words. I love the sound of it when I say it aloud. I also like your use of a belly dancer to SHOW us the meaning of this word. Enjoyed the video. Rod

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Thank you! I?m always told ?show? don?t just tell, so there you are! Haha! Appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from pome lover
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well, you have certainly mastered the meaning of the word!
You probably have made sure that henceforth, your readers will associate the word, "Undulate" with swaying belly dancers! (at least your male readers) :)
Good luck in the contest.
pome lover

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Haha! Well, I write so much about oceans and such, I thought it would be a good way to show another use for the word. I wish I could move my body even 1/2 as well as they can! A beautiful art form for sure! Thanks for your precious comment! :) xoxo
reply by pome lover on 18-Jan-2020
    wish I could, too!
    pl
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is an interesting entry for the "Obscure Word 7-9-7" contest.
This short verse uses the word undulate to describe dancers.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Thanks much! I thought it pretty obscure since I never see it used! Appreciate your kind feedback!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved your words here and of course I have heard of this word and you used it so well and these dancers are so amazing and move with such grace, much enjoyed, I shall watch the video now and enjoy the dance, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    For sure, the girl in the video is amazing! With I could get my body to move even half that much haha! Thank you for the positive review! xoxo
Comment from tfawcus
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A most alluring wiggle to the torso of this young lady as she weaves from side to side. A fine example of an undulation tied in with the metaphor of the waves. Only one thing missing, and that is your definition in the author notes, which is a requirement of the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Oh thank you! Geez! Duh, me! Sincerely appreciate the reminder. Glad you enjoyed!