Welcome, Red Riding-Hood!
Find me, find me, if you can...60 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Welcome, Red Riding Hood, has a fun meter and rhyme as you direct us to what we can finally distinguish as an image we can imagine is a hooded child. I do clearly see the gorilla skull she's looking at to her left.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This poem, Welcome, Red Riding Hood, has a fun meter and rhyme as you direct us to what we can finally distinguish as an image we can imagine is a hooded child. I do clearly see the gorilla skull she's looking at to her left.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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LOL!! Hooray, you found....something! :) Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) We had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, Bill - much appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Yvette. This is a new twist. The poem is very clever and I used it as a guide to locate Red. I'm impressed with how you incorporated the directions into the poem. I think I saw her but I'm not sure. Interesting piece. Z (*_*)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hey Yvette. This is a new twist. The poem is very clever and I used it as a guide to locate Red. I'm impressed with how you incorporated the directions into the poem. I think I saw her but I'm not sure. Interesting piece. Z (*_*)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) We had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, Z - much appreciated! :) Yvette
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That's quite a picture. It's almost surrealistic with all of it color and shape mixes. I was going to say, if she's in there, she's an expert hider. (*_*). Z
Comment from Wils
The artwork and poem really do go well together. I could just imagine Red Riding Hood stumbling and searching through the trees. Good luck in the contest.
Geoff
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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The artwork and poem really do go well together. I could just imagine Red Riding Hood stumbling and searching through the trees. Good luck in the contest.
Geoff
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, Geoff, don?t tell anybody.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) We had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, sir - much appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from padumachitta
hi
I read this twice and for some reason laughed both times...perhaps not what you intendeded...but the voice was just so rascally...
and because I read it twice and liked it even more the second time...the old gold star just had to come out...
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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hi
I read this twice and for some reason laughed both times...perhaps not what you intendeded...but the voice was just so rascally...
and because I read it twice and liked it even more the second time...the old gold star just had to come out...
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hooray for laughter!! But shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) We had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx so much, padumachitta, for your awesome review with those lovely stars shining above it ? makes the crazy blonde want to create more nonsense some day!! Have a great weekend! :) Yvette
Comment from dmt1967
This poem made me giggle. It was funny as well as entertaining and I loved the picture. I liked the font as well as the black background. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This poem made me giggle. It was funny as well as entertaining and I loved the picture. I liked the font as well as the black background. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hooray for giggles, but don?t tell anybody.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) We had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, dmt - much appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Yvette. Well you have chosen an excellent artwork piece to write about. The art is unique, complicated and interesting. Your poem focuses on finding the wolf in the picture. If it is there, I didn't see it. Very enjoyable. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hi Yvette. Well you have chosen an excellent artwork piece to write about. The art is unique, complicated and interesting. Your poem focuses on finding the wolf in the picture. If it is there, I didn't see it. Very enjoyable. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) We had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, Marilyn - much appreciated! :) Yvette
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LOL! I looked at your pix for something in it, too. It DID look as if something could be camouflaged in there.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
WOW! This SO creative and well-written. I think the speaker is the wolf--
reality, or some point of reality. Red Riding Hood is the die-hard idealist,
to the point that she endangers herself. She simply refuses to SEE, won't take off that "hood."
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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WOW! This SO creative and well-written. I think the speaker is the wolf--
reality, or some point of reality. Red Riding Hood is the die-hard idealist,
to the point that she endangers herself. She simply refuses to SEE, won't take off that "hood."
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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That was the idea... but shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) We had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx so much, Janice, for your awesome review with those lovely stars shining above it ? makes the crazy blonde want to create more nonsense some day!! Have a great weekend! :) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the art piece from carver's wood. It seems like a disorganized mess but when you are focused one may see a hidden wolf looking like a tree.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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A very well-written poem about the art piece from carver's wood. It seems like a disorganized mess but when you are focused one may see a hidden wolf looking like a tree.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh, don?t tell anybody.... there's really nothing there.... :) :) We had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, Sandra - much appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A wonderful enjoyable read for this morning. I caught myself trying to see something that is not there. Great rhyme and excellent meter and loved the last line
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A wonderful enjoyable read for this morning. I caught myself trying to see something that is not there. Great rhyme and excellent meter and loved the last line
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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LOL!! Glad you realized the 'absence of somthing'... :) :) We had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, Barb - much appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from Susan Larson
This is so much fun to read. It reminds me of the advanced Simon Says following directions game of "Do this, do that." I didn't find the wolf but had fun trying. Six stars for getting the reader involved and creating something I might use as a substitute teacher to challenge the kids who finish their work first.
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This is so much fun to read. It reminds me of the advanced Simon Says following directions game of "Do this, do that." I didn't find the wolf but had fun trying. Six stars for getting the reader involved and creating something I might use as a substitute teacher to challenge the kids who finish their work first.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Shhhhhhh.... I'll let you in on a little secret: there's really nothing there.... :) :) We had a choose a pic from FanArt and, as my eyes scanned through the treasure trove of offerings over there (soooooo many to see!!), this one just jumped out and I immediately found myself 'looking' for things in it? and a poem was born!! ;) :) Thanx for your wonderful review, Susan, and those awesome stars - you are so appreciated! :) Yvette
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I figured there was nothing there. It?s still something I might have used while subbing. One time when the Atlanta Braves were in the World Series I had them sit in a circle for do this/do that and had them repeatedly swing their arms up and down. I then starting humming the Braves chant. Id love to do something like that with that picture then ask what they see.
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And you know what, it's such a cool pic that I'm sure some active imaginations could actually find something!! In fact, it might be fun to do it with different classes and play different 'theme music' during each class's search.... hmmmm.;) :) You're good teacher, my friend! ;)
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We could have a research project here: the effect of music on a mind seeking meaning. Think we could get a government grant?
