Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Cindy. I've read several of your chapters. Each well written and flows effortlessly, it seems. You have a good grasp of the direction of your story. Described with interesting dialogue and theme. Image is striking, enticing the reader into the fantasy. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2020

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter.

Comment from TallySally

Excellent

Cindy - I really enjoyed this. Very inventive and absorbing. Lots of mystical and magical elements but still down-to-earth.
So true - weariness can be overcome by the simple, but essential, things of life, rest, food ... a bath. But the camaraderie is also a powerful element. You expressed this well.
I loved the names you chose.
The dream not quite a dream aspect is intriguing and charming.
Nice job,
God bless and my best,
Relda

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. The rest is in my portfolio, if you're interested.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Another beautiful chapter in the Dragon saga and Blue is still the liant for our heroes. He knows how to comfort and advice them. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020

Thanks for staying with the story. Glad you're enjoying it.

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hello. I am reading this with no background. It still reads well and kept me going to the end. Ah Dragons so many of us wish they were still about.
I will try to read more when the chapters pop up.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020

Thanks. Glad you liked this chapter. The rest are available in my portfolio if you're interested.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Another engaging chapter. I think you could make it even more engrossing for the reader if you mentioned what the edible bulbs looked like and tasted like. How did the fried fish taste. I'm surprised that the dragons want their fish cooked and smiled at the dragoyles who wouldn't share.

I'm a little confused as to who were present at the vision encounter with the witch. I guess it was only Aaron and Duane and all the dragons. I was surprised that Duane got such a high compliment but maybe it's because Aaron already knows how highly the witch thinks of him.

"How do you do that? Dylan" (missing end quotes after the question mark)

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020

Thanks for the suggestions. I'll fix those quotation marks right away.

Comment from ciliverde

Excellent

This is so interesting, I wish I could see these young dragons! I love the idea, and I loved this chapter even though I'm right in the middle of your book. Are the dragoyles different from the dragons? You might add in the notes section a list of who everybody is, I've seen other people do that and it's helpful. Well done!
Carol

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thanks. You came into the story pretty late. The rest is all available in my portfolio if you're interested. The dragoyles are a little different; kind of a hybrid.

Comment from Spitfire

Exceptional

I'm not a fantasy fiction fan, but I love dragons. Great choice of names: Mountain, Yellow,ink.... Interesting detail that dragons could not cry.
A good witch is a nice twist. This is well-written and could be made into a Disney movie.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thanks for the six! I'd love to see it as a movie. What a thrill that would be.

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

So the witch has left Aaron and the dragons now. It seems we might be nearing the end of your intriguing story.

Just a few points:

Young women would come to her for for learning - 'for' is repeated.

The dragons made a mournful chorus of sounds he had never heard from their throats. - I might have rearranged this differently 'From their throats, the dragons made a mournful chorus of sounds he had never heard before.'

With you I have no fear for the future." - comma after 'you'

"They seem okay," Duane said as Red proved the grumbler wrong - comma after 'said'

"You can all meet up in a dream that isn't quite a dream? How do you do that? Dylan asked. - quote marks needed after 'that'

I found myself swimming with him, first in the river and then in sea after he made it there - should be 'then in the sea'

Cheers
Judy

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020

Thanks. I'll fix that up right away.

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

This just seems to get better every time I read it. I could tell how sad the dragons were when the witch explained to them that her time was coming to an end in that realm. More dragon eggs? I missed that somewhere. I'm enjoying reading this well written saga. Great job and well done!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020

Thanks! I'm so glad you're still enjoying the book. No, there are no more dragon eggs.

Comment from Shirley McLain

Exceptional

A lovely story that I want to read more of. The storyline is excellent as well as your characters. It is active and kept me reading to the last word. Great job. Shirley

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020

Thanks. And thanks for becoming a fan! The other chapters are all available in my portfolio if you're interested.