Teardrop
A human thing that can confuse38 total reviews
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is a very nice poem. Sometimes tears are for sadness and other times
it is for joy. Your seventeen says so much. The artwork is very nice.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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This is a very nice poem. Sometimes tears are for sadness and other times
it is for joy. Your seventeen says so much. The artwork is very nice.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Barbara, I am appreciative of your review and comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-The syllable count is good.
-A good topic and description.
-I like how you use the
teardrop to represent Joy.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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-Very nice image.
-The syllable count is good.
-A good topic and description.
-I like how you use the
teardrop to represent Joy.
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Pam, thank you for the validation.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Therese Caron
Lovely Senryu poem. You chose a perfect picture to complement it, and the words are wonderful also. You did a great job, and I think this will be a good contest entry. Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Lovely Senryu poem. You chose a perfect picture to complement it, and the words are wonderful also. You did a great job, and I think this will be a good contest entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Therese, your kind review already makes me a winnner, thank you.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Tearfrop'
Is a Senryu.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues..
It also, was rich in Theme and Imagery.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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"Tearfrop'
Is a Senryu.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues..
It also, was rich in Theme and Imagery.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Doctor Ricky 1024, thank you for the validations!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. The message is really good and the artwork is priceless and so cute and very adorable. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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I like this. The message is really good and the artwork is priceless and so cute and very adorable. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Jeffrey, thank you, my friend!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 senryu for the contest
with insight into the various ways of seeing things
that can be easily misinterpreted.
Great picture to match
Nicely done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 senryu for the contest
with insight into the various ways of seeing things
that can be easily misinterpreted.
Great picture to match
Nicely done
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Robert, I am grateful for your validation!
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This poem is a very profound statement about the human experience. It follows the 5-7-5 pattern to communicate an essential aspect of our lives: joy, which transcends mere emotion and comes from the spirit. Delightful photo!
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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This poem is a very profound statement about the human experience. It follows the 5-7-5 pattern to communicate an essential aspect of our lives: joy, which transcends mere emotion and comes from the spirit. Delightful photo!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Mary Kay, I do thank you the the validation!
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You're very welcome .
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this thought-provoking piece. Yes, tears not accompanied by words, can be confusing
to observers.
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this thought-provoking piece. Yes, tears not accompanied by words, can be confusing
to observers.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Janice, thank you for your review and comments!
