Comment from
rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the animal contest
with clever play on words and puns.
Interesting art creation to match the words.
I doubt that rabbit would much more than an appetizer for the tiger.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
Lol. Yeah, he'd just be a little snack. Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Robert. I really appreciate it. have a great weekend.
Comment from
Rosemary Everson1
Good thing the tiger thought twice before he gobbled up the rabbit. He would have probably coughed up lots of hares. It's always good to think before we act. There would be less errors if we did.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
Lol. Yes, that's for sure. Thinking things out is always a plus. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Rosemary. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful weekend.