Panties
Christmas gifts from my love7 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is amusing. What ARE they doing? Seems like all three have the same problem. They are probably worried about static cling, but it could be a panty problem. A really fun entry into the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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This is amusing. What ARE they doing? Seems like all three have the same problem. They are probably worried about static cling, but it could be a panty problem. A really fun entry into the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Many thanks Marilyn
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
It is fun to see what the bride gets the entourage for the wedding gifts and this one really is quite unique. But the form is perfect and the laugh was fun. Good luck
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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It is fun to see what the bride gets the entourage for the wedding gifts and this one really is quite unique. But the form is perfect and the laugh was fun. Good luck
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks Barb
Comment from DR DIP
I always wondered about those anal floss undies and how comfortable they would be obviously not that comfortable but they certainly leave nothing to the imagination hey Jen lol
Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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I always wondered about those anal floss undies and how comfortable they would be obviously not that comfortable but they certainly leave nothing to the imagination hey Jen lol
Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Ricky1024
"Panties is a Three Line Poetry Contest Entry."
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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"Panties is a Three Line Poetry Contest Entry."
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Many thanks. Jen
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My pleasure Jenm
Ricky
Comment from Bobby Jo
Ha ha. The funny things about the mysterious gifts we get from our lover are sometimes worth turning into a poem. Thanks for putting a smile on my face. I hope this year brings on more writing times
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Ha ha. The funny things about the mysterious gifts we get from our lover are sometimes worth turning into a poem. Thanks for putting a smile on my face. I hope this year brings on more writing times
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear! This panties that get stuck and cause discomfort are described perfectly here in this funny presentation Jen! A magical write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Oh dear! This panties that get stuck and cause discomfort are described perfectly here in this funny presentation Jen! A magical write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks Dolly
Comment from lyenochka
Comfortable underwear is definitely important. This is a bit on the bawdy side. Your syllable count is right on but the contest has this odd requirement:
"But the poem must address a loved one."
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Comfortable underwear is definitely important. This is a bit on the bawdy side. Your syllable count is right on but the contest has this odd requirement:
"But the poem must address a loved one."
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much Helen. I have re-read the requirements. I'll change it.