Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your picture is adorable, YM. I like how your contest entry described this little bird. We don't have these cuties here. I enjoyed reading your 575. Birds are way smarter than people give them credit. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020

These little guys really are a lot of fun! ;) Thanx for the review, Jan! ;)

Comment from May 1

Excellent

That's such a cool choice for the witty poem. It is very fun to read and I love the image you chose for this one since it completes it perfectly. All in all, I really enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020

Thanks much -- they are fun little friends!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Interesting poem and choice of representations for a witty animal/birds. "Bottoms up!" Bill, upside-down. Good luck with the contest and your writings.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020

Thanks much -- they are fun little friends!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good Witty animal 5-7-5 contest writing prompt entry.
This short verse describes the action in the picture nicely.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020

Thanks much -- they are fun little friends!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This witty 5-7-5 on animals, Our Neighborhood Nuthatch, has the right set up and finds that this birds world is on its head.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020

Thanks much -- they are fun little friends!

Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

Ha, ha! This is a fun animal 5-7-5 poem. You haven't contrived to create a "false" scenario, most people will have seen this themselves and had a wry smile at the birds at the bird feeder {thumbs up}.

Good luck with your entry in the voting booth {smiles}.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020

Thanks much - they are fun little friends!

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Our Neighborhood Nuthatch"
(Beautiful bird by the way)
This is a witty animal 5-7-5 Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly fine with me!
Thanks and good luck with these Upside Nutty Nuthatches;
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020

Thanks much -- they are fun little friends!

reply by Ricky1024 on 10-Jan-2020

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a delightful write and how do they eat upside down? Birds are fascinating and you must gain much joy from watching your bird feeder, I enjoyed your fun words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020

Thanks much - they are fun little friends!

Comment from Minglement

Excellent

This is a fun entry for this contest. I loved the last line from someone who obviously enjoys observing birdie antics. Great illustration, as well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020

Thanks much - they are fun little friends!

Comment from Tina Crute

Excellent

First, I love the picture. Its nice to see real nature as opposed to paintings or other forms, digital art, etc. I also like a poem that teaches me something, as this has.
I hope you do well in the contest:)
Tina

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020

Thanks much - they are fun little friends!