Fresh Aspirations
Outlook is everything when it comes to dreams...40 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
Wow, such an uplifting entry for this contest. I could believe hope has a lovely perfume! And I'd much rather think of New Years ambitions than New Years resolutions. Your students must have been continue Sally inspired ;) Sadly, no sixes left.
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Wow, such an uplifting entry for this contest. I could believe hope has a lovely perfume! And I'd much rather think of New Years ambitions than New Years resolutions. Your students must have been continue Sally inspired ;) Sadly, no sixes left.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Hooray for uplifting - it is my motto!! ;) :) January brings us the start of just about anything if we look at it that way? make plans and move forward! ;-) Here's wishing you a Happy January full of planning! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your have made effective use of all of your syllables in this enthusiastic,
lovely poem. You have a pleasing blend of literal and figurative language and have created awesome imagery.
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Your have made effective use of all of your syllables in this enthusiastic,
lovely poem. You have a pleasing blend of literal and figurative language and have created awesome imagery.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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These 'shorties' are always a challenge, but I enjoy a good language/math mixture..... I get to be creative and have to count!! LOL! Thanx for stopping by, Janice! :) Yvette
Comment from June Sargent
Hope springs eternal and it does bloom faster with a good splash of positive thoughts! Words of wisdom to begin the new year. Nice artwork as well. I enjoyed this piece.
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Hope springs eternal and it does bloom faster with a good splash of positive thoughts! Words of wisdom to begin the new year. Nice artwork as well. I enjoyed this piece.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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These 'shorties' are always a challenge, but I enjoy a good language/math mixture..... I get to be creative and have to count, yeah?!! LOL! Thanx for stopping by, June! :) Yvette
Comment from Tina Crute
I love the splashes of perfume thought. How original! I'm glad you shared this. It reminds me to look at things in a new fresh way! Splash on a little hope and positivity and hard work and see what blooms!
Lovely!
Tina
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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I love the splashes of perfume thought. How original! I'm glad you shared this. It reminds me to look at things in a new fresh way! Splash on a little hope and positivity and hard work and see what blooms!
Lovely!
Tina
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Splash away, Tina!! ;) :) These 'shorties' are always a challenge, but I enjoy a good language/math mixture..... I get to be creative and have to count!! LOL! Thanx for stopping by, my friend! :) Yvette
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I will be stoppimg by
again soon! I sincerely
appreciate you:)
Tina
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. You should do well in the contest with this 20 syllable poem. There is a good progression in the first three lines to the conclusion in the fourth. Good luck in the contest. Z
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Hello Yvette. You should do well in the contest with this 20 syllable poem. There is a good progression in the first three lines to the conclusion in the fourth. Good luck in the contest. Z
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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Hey, Z -- good to see Ralphie's face again... I'm playing catch up (or at least trying to) this afternoon! ;) These 'shorties' are always a challenge, but I enjoy a good language/math mixture..... I get to be creative and have to count!! LOL! Thanx for stopping by! :) Yvette
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Hey Yvette. Ralph is starting to get lazy, demanding and even snotty at times. He's becoming a liberal. They better snap out of it. Z (*_*)
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Okay... it's been a long time since I actually snorted and laughed out loud at my computer screen, but I just did!! Awww, damn, Z, I so needed that ... thank you! And Ralph's not getting more liberal, he's just getting older faster than you and he wants to be sure to get all of his 'social security' before it runs out.... lol! Oh, wait, maybe that does make him more liberal... yikes!! ;) :)
Comment from Cindy Warren
I'm hoping for some nice big blossoms in the New Year. With a little luck some good things will happen. Even if it would just warm up a bit that would be nice. Good luck in the contest.
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I'm hoping for some nice big blossoms in the New Year. With a little luck some good things will happen. Even if it would just warm up a bit that would be nice. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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These 'shorties' are always a challenge, but I enjoy a good language/math mixture..... I get to be creative and have to count!! LOL! Thanx for stopping by! :) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful poem, Yvette. I like your 6/4/6/4 lines - it made the meter flow than my 5-syllable lines. And the artistic personification of January "splashing perfuming" waiting for those "ambitions to bloom." I'm smelling a winner here!
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Beautiful poem, Yvette. I like your 6/4/6/4 lines - it made the meter flow than my 5-syllable lines. And the artistic personification of January "splashing perfuming" waiting for those "ambitions to bloom." I'm smelling a winner here!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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These 'shorties' are always a challenge, Helen, but I enjoy a good language/math mixture..... I get to be creative and have to count!! LOL! However, better than yours...? Naaah, I just really do like to play with these short forms... pop into the contests and do a "Rubber Duckie Write" for the evening....lol! ;) Take care, my friend, and thanx for stopping by! :) Yvette
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I can see it now and smell the sweet smell of success, YM. Great job with your contest entry--syllable count is correct with a great positive message that we all need to heed. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with love and Admiration, Jan
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I can see it now and smell the sweet smell of success, YM. Great job with your contest entry--syllable count is correct with a great positive message that we all need to heed. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with love and Admiration, Jan
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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These 'shorties' are always a challenge, but I enjoy a good language/math mixture..... I get to be creative and have to count!! LOL! Thanx for stopping by, Jan! :) Yvette
Comment from Ricky1024
"Fresh Aspirations."
Is a "20 Syllable New year's Contest Entry."
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a good night.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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"Fresh Aspirations."
Is a "20 Syllable New year's Contest Entry."
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a good night.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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These 'shorties' are always a challenge, but I enjoy a good language/math mixture..... I get to be creative and have to count!! LOL! Thanx for stopping by, Ricky! :) Yvette
Comment from Bobby Jo
Yea, the only way to get through everything that has gone wrong in this world is to be excited and gun hoe for ringing in the new year. May the ous year be a year for much more writing
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Yea, the only way to get through everything that has gone wrong in this world is to be excited and gun hoe for ringing in the new year. May the ous year be a year for much more writing
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
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These 'shorties' are always a challenge, but I enjoy a good language/math mixture..... I get to be creative and have to count!! LOL! Thanx for stopping by! :) Yvette
