rain dance
a 5 7 5 poem5 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
Great entry for the contest, capitalizing on one of my favorite aspects of lovely rain - the sounds. Added to the elements the repeated imagery of dance - delightful! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Great entry for the contest, capitalizing on one of my favorite aspects of lovely rain - the sounds. Added to the elements the repeated imagery of dance - delightful! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review and sparkly stars. I am changing my roof from wood shingles to tin for this very reason, cheers.
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
The image and the imagery complement each other quite well. Simple words that bespeak a portrait of a perfect lazy/hazy day. Wishing you well in this contest... ...ec
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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The image and the imagery complement each other quite well. Simple words that bespeak a portrait of a perfect lazy/hazy day. Wishing you well in this contest... ...ec
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review. I love rain on a tin roof, especially when I can sleep in, cheers.
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you're welcome... ...ec
Comment from May 1
Nice. I love the vocabulary you chose for this poem, it works really well. It's a wonderfully written poem that is really fun to read. All in all, I enjoyed the poem.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Nice. I love the vocabulary you chose for this poem, it works really well. It's a wonderfully written poem that is really fun to read. All in all, I enjoyed the poem.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the encouraging review. I love the sound of rain on a tin roof, snuggled under the covers. Have a great weekend, cheers.
Comment from Ricky1024
"rain dance" is q 5-7-5 rain writing prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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"rain dance" is q 5-7-5 rain writing prompt Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the encouraging review. I am changing my roof from shingle to tin next year. One of the reasons is because I love that sound, cheers.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Interesting artwork
and good presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective.
-I like the dance references
to describe the rain.
-Maybe we can send
the rain dancing over to Australia!
-A very good concluding line and poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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-Interesting artwork
and good presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective.
-I like the dance references
to describe the rain.
-Maybe we can send
the rain dancing over to Australia!
-A very good concluding line and poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review. I have been rain~dancing for Australia for months now. I pray things are getting better there.
This is a clear glimpse of global warming.
We must take heed.
j
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You are very welcome, and I think we all are doing everything we can to think of those who are faced with such dire situations. I agree about global warming and taking heed! Thank you for caring, too!
