Word Woven Tapestries
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Ballad of The Serpent"A collection of poems which tell a story.
2 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
This is really good! I don't know how you put your story together the way you did to make it rhyme. You definitely have some skills my friend. I think you should write more like this one. It's not just a poem, but a story behind the rhymes.
Great writing!
Your friend,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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This is really good! I don't know how you put your story together the way you did to make it rhyme. You definitely have some skills my friend. I think you should write more like this one. It's not just a poem, but a story behind the rhymes.
Great writing!
Your friend,
Shana :)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Really thank you ever so much for the review. Have other story ides, just don't have any of them fully developed yet.
Your friend,
Faye :)
Comment from Carl DeVere
An interesting narrative that, though it needs a bit of polishing, still holds my initial attention. I'm not certain about the meaning of either the plastic or rubber snake. Is it a metaphor for the killer's inner self? Scary graphic accompanies verse well. Snakes always intimidate, even if they are harmless.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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An interesting narrative that, though it needs a bit of polishing, still holds my initial attention. I'm not certain about the meaning of either the plastic or rubber snake. Is it a metaphor for the killer's inner self? Scary graphic accompanies verse well. Snakes always intimidate, even if they are harmless.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I guess i wasn't clear on that. it is both a warning sign and a way of drawing target into his sights. Thanks for the review, though.