If Only I Could. . .
An Angel of God!48 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely and well written free verse Valentines Day love poem you have penned and dedicated to your wife. You used very loving words with very loving imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
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This is a very lovely and well written free verse Valentines Day love poem you have penned and dedicated to your wife. You used very loving words with very loving imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Teri! Thanks for the review, kind words and support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.
Comment from Raul1
this is a well written free verse poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. It is very easy to read and understand. I like it. Thanks for sharing!
Nice work!
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this is a well written free verse poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. It is very easy to read and understand. I like it. Thanks for sharing!
Nice work!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Raul! Thanks for the review, kind words and support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill
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You're welcome.
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a beautiful tribute to your wife. Anyone reading this poem would know the strength and beauty of your love for her. And this is so fitting for Valentine's Day! Your poem is beautifully written And also very nicely presented. You chose a great image to complement your poem. Good luck in the contest!
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This is a beautiful tribute to your wife. Anyone reading this poem would know the strength and beauty of your love for her. And this is so fitting for Valentine's Day! Your poem is beautifully written And also very nicely presented. You chose a great image to complement your poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Therese! Thanks for the review, kind words, and support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.
Comment from nomi338
This beautiful poem is one I hesitate to share with my wife. I fear upon hearing it she will look at me and demand to know what I am willing to do for her and her love
I being nowhere near as gifted as the writer who crafted this masterpiece.
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This beautiful poem is one I hesitate to share with my wife. I fear upon hearing it she will look at me and demand to know what I am willing to do for her and her love
I being nowhere near as gifted as the writer who crafted this masterpiece.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," my dear friend! Thanks for the "Exceptional" review, kind words, and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill
Comment from crzypnter
This is a wonderfully crafted poem that speaks to the heart of love. A romanticized love poem for your wife. That flows well from line to line with your internal rhymes, creating a visual impact for the readers. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully crafted poem, credit must be given when due. God bless
August
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This is a wonderfully crafted poem that speaks to the heart of love. A romanticized love poem for your wife. That flows well from line to line with your internal rhymes, creating a visual impact for the readers. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully crafted poem, credit must be given when due. God bless
August
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," August! Thanks for the "Exceptional" review, kind words, and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill (Commando).
Comment from Bobby Jo
Nothing lasts forever, maybe never, maybe each second will begin only in heaven again
The hope and peace is very hard, if not impossible to grasp that this may be the end
Willeternity bring back this moment to start again
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Nothing lasts forever, maybe never, maybe each second will begin only in heaven again
The hope and peace is very hard, if not impossible to grasp that this may be the end
Willeternity bring back this moment to start again
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Bobby Jo! Please remember, "Kind words spoken help to mend heart's that are broken." Thanks for the kind words and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Commando
My what sincere and lovely words you wrote in your free verse poem. There are numerous caring words.
I read your romance poem over. And these lines impressed me the most with tears.
'I'm waiting,' you will spread your wings in the early spring, then join me. Then on that Holy day--in a gentle way, I can hold you again in my arms--void of harm, and whisper the words, I love you.
Gert
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Hello Commando
My what sincere and lovely words you wrote in your free verse poem. There are numerous caring words.
I read your romance poem over. And these lines impressed me the most with tears.
'I'm waiting,' you will spread your wings in the early spring, then join me. Then on that Holy day--in a gentle way, I can hold you again in my arms--void of harm, and whisper the words, I love you.
Gert
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Gert! Thanks for the review/support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.
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You are welcome Commando and God Bless you.
Gert
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely ~~~FREE VERSE~~~ writing prompt entry.
This is a beautiful tribute to a wife, obviously greatly missed.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a lovely ~~~FREE VERSE~~~ writing prompt entry.
This is a beautiful tribute to a wife, obviously greatly missed.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Sharon! Thanks for the review/support. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully, Bill
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is such an amazing poem to your wife. Even though this is done in free verse, you have lots of internal rhymes. The things you would do
for her....catching stars, stop the world spinning and gather wildflowers
are all vivid images.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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This is such an amazing poem to your wife. Even though this is done in free verse, you have lots of internal rhymes. The things you would do
for her....catching stars, stop the world spinning and gather wildflowers
are all vivid images.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Barbara! Thanks for the review/support. It is an honor meeting you. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully, Bill
Comment from dragonpoet
Hey Bill.
I like the internal rhyme in the love poem about all the things you would do for your love to make life perfect. It also alludes to seeing each other in an eternal place.
Good luck.
Keep writing
Joan
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Hey Bill.
I like the internal rhyme in the love poem about all the things you would do for your love to make life perfect. It also alludes to seeing each other in an eternal place.
Good luck.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Joan! Thanks for the review/support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully, Bill
